Secret Rendezvous (a sonnet)
Rendezvous contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Chuck Keller
This one explores the passion and desire of the Secret Rendezvous.
Such moments of desire fulfilled briefly erase the turmoil and strife of everyday life.
You have described the encounter well. Your descriptive writing is exceptional.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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This one explores the passion and desire of the Secret Rendezvous.
Such moments of desire fulfilled briefly erase the turmoil and strife of everyday life.
You have described the encounter well. Your descriptive writing is exceptional.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Chuck. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great night.
Ron
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love this writing style of poetry. The sonnet explains beautifully how love's precious moments need a rendezvous of sorts.
Written well with rhymes that touch the soul and a flow that melts like warm butter. This says so much yet does in within the confines of a sonnet. Thanks for sharing this terrific poetic style and may you always find the one you love in a rendezvous.
Jesse
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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I love this writing style of poetry. The sonnet explains beautifully how love's precious moments need a rendezvous of sorts.
Written well with rhymes that touch the soul and a flow that melts like warm butter. This says so much yet does in within the confines of a sonnet. Thanks for sharing this terrific poetic style and may you always find the one you love in a rendezvous.
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review, Jesse. I think I love the sonnet form the most out of all of them. I simply can't resist a chance to use it. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments, friend. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have yourself a great night, J, and thanks again.
Ron
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You're welcome, Ron.
Jesse
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa! Hubba, hubba! This is ssssssizzlin;!!! I had to take all my clothes off after reading it just to cool down! (Stop making puking sounds there, DragonSkulls!!) This is everything a rendezvous should be! I see you boogie-ing on down to the Winner's Circle!!
One teeny spag: The 't' got left out of 'emptiness.'
Good luck!!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Whoa! Hubba, hubba! This is ssssssizzlin;!!! I had to take all my clothes off after reading it just to cool down! (Stop making puking sounds there, DragonSkulls!!) This is everything a rendezvous should be! I see you boogie-ing on down to the Winner's Circle!!
One teeny spag: The 't' got left out of 'emptiness.'
Good luck!!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Hahaha. Need to cool down, huh? This is fairly mild for something to steam up that much. Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review and for catching the goof. Come to find out I was actually spelling rendezvous wrong too. Funny how this word's spelling is so off from how it's pronounced. Ha. I really appreciate the gracious stars and comments, Rache. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have yourself a great night and thank you again.
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Ron
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This is why it's so fun to have a vivid imagination, you see!!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Clandestine rendezvous often do not provide the love that lasts a lifetime and your sonnet points that out in a subtle way. I enjoyed your well written sonnet with good rhymes and great metre.
Just one suggestion for this line:
(But is it sin when fate keep(s) souls apart)
Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Clandestine rendezvous often do not provide the love that lasts a lifetime and your sonnet points that out in a subtle way. I enjoyed your well written sonnet with good rhymes and great metre.
Just one suggestion for this line:
(But is it sin when fate keep(s) souls apart)
Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the great review and for catching the goof, Dolly. You always have my back. I fixed it. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Ron
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You are most welcome Ron, love Dolly x x x
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Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful one of the appointment for the contact. I wish you the very best in the contest I enjoyed listening to it much. It is presented well, and I love the words.
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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This is a wonderful one of the appointment for the contact. I wish you the very best in the contest I enjoyed listening to it much. It is presented well, and I love the words.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Pat. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Ron