Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Other World Pt1"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from Jim Wile
You've laid the groundwork well, Lea, and gave us some nice hints about where this is bound to go. How unlucky for you to have ended up at this particular friend's house, who appears to be doing you no favors by exposing you to what's likely to come. The potential for further abuse is very great with this lifestyle, and with your naivete it's an unhealthy environment to be in.
I hope at some point you meet a decent man because so far, the men in your life have cast a pall over men in general. - Jim
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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You've laid the groundwork well, Lea, and gave us some nice hints about where this is bound to go. How unlucky for you to have ended up at this particular friend's house, who appears to be doing you no favors by exposing you to what's likely to come. The potential for further abuse is very great with this lifestyle, and with your naivete it's an unhealthy environment to be in.
I hope at some point you meet a decent man because so far, the men in your life have cast a pall over men in general. - Jim
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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I have never held one man accountable for another. Although trust issue was definitely there but that was for anyone men or women. I tried to beat and open mind which sometimes gets me in trouble. Thank you, Jim for your kind review is always. I'm so happy to see you here and appreciate you very much. I hope your evening is the best!
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You're very welcome, Lea. I'm so glad you still have some faith in mankind after what you've been through in your life. I'm also glad you're finding fulfillment in sharing your story with us here at FanStory and making some new friends in the process, my friend.
Comment from JSD
Oh, truly from the frying pan and into the fire. Unbelievable! But your truth sings out from your prose. Heart in mouth again to know how you escape this horror. x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Oh, truly from the frying pan and into the fire. Unbelievable! But your truth sings out from your prose. Heart in mouth again to know how you escape this horror. x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Hello john thank you again glad to see you here as always! Because I was so wholly unprepared for the world. I made lots of mistakes and this was the First of many. Thank you for reading as always I appreciate your review and I hope your evening is grand!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh dear! From the frying pan into the fire. Your vulnerability and low self esteem have almost inevitably led to this confrontation, like a pin to a magnet. You've been drawn by your friend into this scenario as you succumb almost hypnotically to her stronger will. She may well have meant the best for you but she's on an unequal footing and doesn't appreciate just how much of a ghost you still remain, despite the girly transformation (I like the use of third person as you look into the mirror). Thanks for sharing, Lea! Take care Debbie x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Oh dear! From the frying pan into the fire. Your vulnerability and low self esteem have almost inevitably led to this confrontation, like a pin to a magnet. You've been drawn by your friend into this scenario as you succumb almost hypnotically to her stronger will. She may well have meant the best for you but she's on an unequal footing and doesn't appreciate just how much of a ghost you still remain, despite the girly transformation (I like the use of third person as you look into the mirror). Thanks for sharing, Lea! Take care Debbie x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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You're so smart you can hit the nail on the head again! It's a good bad scenario mostly bad I was so unprepared for the whole I didn't know what the hell would do I made a lot of mistakes and lucky to be here. Thank you my friend for a wonderful review always very very on the money. Hope you're having a great evening!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness Lea, from one threat to another here as those predators are everywhere when it comes to young girls. I have always liked to wear pretty clothes and look my best and men often think this is an invitation to maul and touch. I expect your experience of men at this point would put you off for life. The problem is that young girls are vulnerable and can easily be overpowered by men such as this. It is not surprising that you were introduced to nights out with your friend as why should you not enjoy yourself. On the other hand, it is dangerous.
Another fine chapter, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Oh my goodness Lea, from one threat to another here as those predators are everywhere when it comes to young girls. I have always liked to wear pretty clothes and look my best and men often think this is an invitation to maul and touch. I expect your experience of men at this point would put you off for life. The problem is that young girls are vulnerable and can easily be overpowered by men such as this. It is not surprising that you were introduced to nights out with your friend as why should you not enjoy yourself. On the other hand, it is dangerous.
Another fine chapter, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you Dolly! Thank you for another great review! They are very wise lady offers very wise comments for which i'm Truly grateful! Life in itself is dangerous. Thank you again my friend I hope you're having a great night!
Comment from Chuck Keller
Along for the ride with you and Spirit.
This one looks a little dangerous but I'm sure you'll make it okay.
Your friend is beginning to sound a little risky but at least you have a place to sleep.
Can't wait to hear the rest.
Thanks again for letting me tag along
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Along for the ride with you and Spirit.
This one looks a little dangerous but I'm sure you'll make it okay.
Your friend is beginning to sound a little risky but at least you have a place to sleep.
Can't wait to hear the rest.
Thanks again for letting me tag along
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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I'm always happy to see you here every time all the time. Your reviews are special and unique to you. I thank you for it! I'm glad to have you reading along! I thank you again and again and again for all your wonderful reviews. Thank you so much my friend have a great night!