Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The In-between "This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from Jim Wile
Although your friend E didn't do you any good, I'd like to think that your lecture to her may have done her some good in the long run, just as your story now will hopefully help some who read it in the same way.
Abuse comes in many forms, and you are doing a great service by pointing out its many ways. Some are not as obvious as others, like your friend abusing you by taking advantage of your unfortunate circumstances to try to hook you into a lifestyle that no one should aspire to.
In the story right now, you are in such a vulnerable position with virtually no good options. You can't turn to family, and the two friends who you sought out turned out to be disastrous. You can't trust the authorities either. What can you do? I don't know, but somehow you found a way because here you are telling your story.
Despite being so sad, this is so riveting, Lea. I'm dying to know what you ended up doing. Just know that you are to be forgiven whatever wrong turns you may take in just attempting to survive because that's the goal now. - Jim
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Although your friend E didn't do you any good, I'd like to think that your lecture to her may have done her some good in the long run, just as your story now will hopefully help some who read it in the same way.
Abuse comes in many forms, and you are doing a great service by pointing out its many ways. Some are not as obvious as others, like your friend abusing you by taking advantage of your unfortunate circumstances to try to hook you into a lifestyle that no one should aspire to.
In the story right now, you are in such a vulnerable position with virtually no good options. You can't turn to family, and the two friends who you sought out turned out to be disastrous. You can't trust the authorities either. What can you do? I don't know, but somehow you found a way because here you are telling your story.
Despite being so sad, this is so riveting, Lea. I'm dying to know what you ended up doing. Just know that you are to be forgiven whatever wrong turns you may take in just attempting to survive because that's the goal now. - Jim
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Jim I thank you for your kindness! I would like to say life goes on smooth but life is never that way. Even the most devout have issues. There's always an issue to deal with.
Thank you, Jim, thank you for hanging in there. I'll keep thanking you until the cows come home and then some! Thank you again my friend hope you have enough tonight!
Comment from Jacob1395
I'm glad that you told E how you felt about how she'd mistreated you, and yet she still believed she helped you. She definitely seems like someone who only thinks of herself. Another powerful, well written chapter, Lea.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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I'm glad that you told E how you felt about how she'd mistreated you, and yet she still believed she helped you. She definitely seems like someone who only thinks of herself. Another powerful, well written chapter, Lea.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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A true definition of narcissism for sure! Thank you jacob thank you so much for reading and for offering your kind comments Hand for your fine review I hope you have a great night!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
At least you have escaped the clutches of your friend, you have a few belongings and 200 dollars, not much to make a start, but you might get a lucky break, let us hope so Lea, you could do with some good luck. I feel happier now that you have your head screwed on and hopeful some good decisions will get you started on a better life, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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At least you have escaped the clutches of your friend, you have a few belongings and 200 dollars, not much to make a start, but you might get a lucky break, let us hope so Lea, you could do with some good luck. I feel happier now that you have your head screwed on and hopeful some good decisions will get you started on a better life, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Lifes a roller coaster. I had many ups and downs and learned the hardway. Your wisdom us always spot on! Thank you my friend!!
Comment from BethShelby
Leaving that girl behind was certainly a victory for you. I am glad you told her off. I wonder how she ended up. Running her own brothal? So the house where you were told to leave and not return and where everyone had moved out happened when? I'm a little confused because now you saying you returned to the park where you met the homeless couple. I thought you met them after you had to run from the house people moved from. I really like the poem you have at the beginning of this. Also the one that won third about the mountain is really neat.
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Leaving that girl behind was certainly a victory for you. I am glad you told her off. I wonder how she ended up. Running her own brothal? So the house where you were told to leave and not return and where everyone had moved out happened when? I'm a little confused because now you saying you returned to the park where you met the homeless couple. I thought you met them after you had to run from the house people moved from. I really like the poem you have at the beginning of this. Also the one that won third about the mountain is really neat.
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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And they told me to leave and not come back. But the next day I went back and I saw him moving down there and some yellow tape on the driveway. Then I went to a friend around the corner or slept underneath her stairs which she tried to introduce me to a bad lifestyle. So I left and went to a local park. Not the woods per se but just to a park. So now this far in the book. I am attempting to find new shelter. One that I don't have to be afraid will be taken from me in short order. Thank you for your questions your curiosity and you know I enjoy. It's part of your charm! Thank you for your review and your great rating! Thanks again!