Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Steps"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
I'm sure I would be leery of any opportunity that showed up unexpectedly, given the situations that you've dealt with up to now. You just need to get that one break that will provide some stability for you.
It's interesting that you enjoy fly fishing. I have a fly rod I bought when I was twelve, but I've seldom used it. Perhaps now that I'm retired I'll break it out and give it a try when spring arrives.
When you're speaking of hearing something the spelling is hear not here. That's the only mistake I noticed.
Blessings,
Tom
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Hello Lea,
I'm sure I would be leery of any opportunity that showed up unexpectedly, given the situations that you've dealt with up to now. You just need to get that one break that will provide some stability for you.
It's interesting that you enjoy fly fishing. I have a fly rod I bought when I was twelve, but I've seldom used it. Perhaps now that I'm retired I'll break it out and give it a try when spring arrives.
When you're speaking of hearing something the spelling is hear not here. That's the only mistake I noticed.
Blessings,
Tom
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Don't like you tom these suggestions for heaven and corrections are very important to me! I'm on the bonaparte plateau caribou country fishing for kokanee. I've been ocean fishing like fishing spin casting fly, fishing ice fishing steelhead fishing in january. Yes, I enjoy fishing. I do mostly catch your release. I will keep what I plan on eating. Thank you again tom for your fine review and rating! Enjoy your evening!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is interesting. I like your writing. You write well in both poetry and prose. I like the poetry in the beginning and it sets the tone of the prose. I would like to read more.
What's the purpose of parts with two different fonds.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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This is interesting. I like your writing. You write well in both poetry and prose. I like the poetry in the beginning and it sets the tone of the prose. I would like to read more.
What's the purpose of parts with two different fonds.
Excellent.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you again!