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Comment from Jacob1395
You can really see how Mrs D is trapped in her marriage, and the way how Mr D treats makes me so angry. I'm rooting for you both to get out of this situation, although I'm slightly nervous to find out what comes next. Another intense read Lea.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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You can really see how Mrs D is trapped in her marriage, and the way how Mr D treats makes me so angry. I'm rooting for you both to get out of this situation, although I'm slightly nervous to find out what comes next. Another intense read Lea.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you again Jacob you're so happy with your reviews and your kind rating. Thank you for your comments too. There are always insightful, no eternally grateful for those as well. I hope you have the best holiday too and a great night!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
There is no point trying to fight this man who's like a raging beast with sky-high adrenaline and no rational thought. An horrendously tough episode with only one option, once again, to escape. How you survive all this injury, Lea, I'll never know. Some small edits: waved; pris(e); you kn(o)w this. This is dire for you. I can only hope there's something round the corner. At least you have company and, possibly, some mandatory support for the children (though I'm not sure about Social Services!) Take care Debbie x
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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There is no point trying to fight this man who's like a raging beast with sky-high adrenaline and no rational thought. An horrendously tough episode with only one option, once again, to escape. How you survive all this injury, Lea, I'll never know. Some small edits: waved; pris(e); you kn(o)w this. This is dire for you. I can only hope there's something round the corner. At least you have company and, possibly, some mandatory support for the children (though I'm not sure about Social Services!) Take care Debbie x
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Hi Debbie perfect, thank you and I made those corrections. You guys are awesome with the edits suggestions! it's so helpful to me! Thank you again I hope your day is marvelous!
Comment from BethShelby
The Indian culture is different. I don't think the women aren't as independant as we are. I'm surprised she even argues with him. I would imagine she would like you to stay but feels you must go.
You have totally changed my opinion of Canada. I thought it was mountains in the west and flatter lake country in the east and was cool to freezing all year. I had no idea there were rain forests and prairies.
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The Indian culture is different. I don't think the women aren't as independant as we are. I'm surprised she even argues with him. I would imagine she would like you to stay but feels you must go.
You have totally changed my opinion of Canada. I thought it was mountains in the west and flatter lake country in the east and was cool to freezing all year. I had no idea there were rain forests and prairies.
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Oh yeah, and she felt like it. You can google the three prairie provinces one is alberta manitoba saskatchewan. B c where I live have a rocky's the great and mighty rocky mountains. Eastern part of canada has what's called the canadian shield, a very ancient mountain chain that was flattened by the icebergs and the glacarved it quite flat and created hundreds of lakes, which a lot of people now fish to this day. The niagara falls is in ontario the largest falls in the world. Three great lakes and a couple of smaller great lakes are the leftovers of the last ice age. I know that it took us 7 days to get to Ontario. It would have taken access another 3 to 5 days to cross the rest. We camped the whole time. I then took them north to the yukon country the land of perpetual sun. The sun never sets at a certain point of the equator we were very close. I remember camping and I had my son's tent. I don't were fighting and they were fighting and they knew when they fight. They were tired so I looked up my watch sitting there. Sunbathing I see it's one am. no wonder they're tired. In the yukon, as far as the eye can see, rolling hills covered with stunted, ancient pines. Truly is a wonderful country. Much filled with eye candy in all the eco systems. I soon will go to the mountai. Have many pictures yes peaks into the lowest valleys even have desert here. It's called arid land in a stretch called the Okanagan. All of our fruit is grown there. I battled your brains out sorry, thank you so much for this review. I appreciate it very much. I hope this satisfies some of your interest. I hope you have an awesome day thanks again!