Comment from Wendy G

Exceptional

This beautiful and moving poem brought a freshness and spiritual blessing to the well-known story of the shepherds in the fields. It must have been a transformative experience for each of them. Thoughtfully, imaginatively, and creatively written. Beautifully done. Best wishes for your entry!
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you so very much for your beautiful words, Wendy, and for the very generous six stars! Greatly appreciated! xxx

Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

It's easy to believe this might have been the way they told it. You weave the Christmas story into your narrative seamlessly. A splendid entry to the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you so much - I really appreciate your feedback and the very generous six stars! :)

Comment from Tetamarina66

Excellent

This is a very nice holiday poem. Well versed and well written. If you can change the font which will be easier for me to read.

Will there be more poems

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you so much! Is the font difficult for you to read? Which device are you using - a laptop or iPad?

reply by Tetamarina66 on 10-Dec-2023

I was using my iPhone which I normally use

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Ah. The formatting on that must look very different from the laptop that I use or the iPad that some other writers use.

reply by Tetamarina66 on 10-Dec-2023

yup you hit the nail right on the head, which is just an expression that you were right

Comment from patcelaw

Exceptional

This is absolutely one of the most beautiful Christmas poems I have ever read. I enjoyed it very much and it flows smoothly as it is being read aloud. I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Pat Patricia.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you so much for this absolutely beautiful feedback, Pat, and thank you so much for your very generous six stars! Merry Christmas to you and yours as well! xxx

Comment from evilynne

Exceptional

What a beautiful well told story of the nativity visit. It is well written and fascinating and speaks of your faith. I wish you the best of luck in rhe contest. Evi

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you so much for your positive feedback and the generous six stars! :)