Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "The Call"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
I'm glad you intervened for Mrs. D. She may not have appreciated it right away, but if you didn't do something, she might well have ended up dead. It's hard to fathom that you're out in the world again without much support. Whatever happened to the friendly fellow from the church group? Perhaps he could offer a life line. I'm glad you got a chance to visit the mountains. I hope you can find a residence there soon.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Hello Lea,
I'm glad you intervened for Mrs. D. She may not have appreciated it right away, but if you didn't do something, she might well have ended up dead. It's hard to fathom that you're out in the world again without much support. Whatever happened to the friendly fellow from the church group? Perhaps he could offer a life line. I'm glad you got a chance to visit the mountains. I hope you can find a residence there soon.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Hi Tom. I may have that covered I'm crossing my fingers. Thank you for reading again and thank you for offering your thoughts and your compassion too. I really hope you have the best of evenings!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This chapter is very emotional and makes me sad. It moves along well and I wonder where she would go with only a $5 bill. It will be quite hard journey but she has to leave that hell of home.
Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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This chapter is very emotional and makes me sad. It moves along well and I wonder where she would go with only a $5 bill. It will be quite hard journey but she has to leave that hell of home.
Well done.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your review of your time and stopping in for a read. These things are important to me.
Doesn't it's also like gold for me too? Thank you for coming in for a read offering your fine review. I wish you the best Christmas. A happy new year and I hope you're aiding as great as well!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I'm out of sixes, but this definitely would have received one if I hadn't been so impetuous. This was extremely excellent. Exciting beyond belief! So. Very. VIVID!!
Wonderful chapter, Lea. You're going great guns here. xoxo
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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I'm out of sixes, but this definitely would have received one if I hadn't been so impetuous. This was extremely excellent. Exciting beyond belief! So. Very. VIVID!!
Wonderful chapter, Lea. You're going great guns here. xoxo
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Thank you my girlfriend i'm so glad you Like it where we live. I thank you so much for this and I thank you so much for you! I hope it is The best and I hope your evening is too!
Comment from Jim Wile
It's just hard to imagine the desperation you must have felt at this point in time. Here you are, bruised, exhausted, starving, alone, not knowing where you'd be sleeping that night, and it's raining. How much worse can things possibly get for you? At least you are out of danger for the moment since you bravely faced that maniac and escaped his clutches.
That was a wonderful thing you did for Mrs. D. by calling for an ambulance. Hopefully she will finally come to her senses, take her children with her, and leave that lunatic for good.
I loved your poem at the beginning and can see the appeal of the mountains for you. What a great contrast to the evil you have found in the world of man. - Jim
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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It's just hard to imagine the desperation you must have felt at this point in time. Here you are, bruised, exhausted, starving, alone, not knowing where you'd be sleeping that night, and it's raining. How much worse can things possibly get for you? At least you are out of danger for the moment since you bravely faced that maniac and escaped his clutches.
That was a wonderful thing you did for Mrs. D. by calling for an ambulance. Hopefully she will finally come to her senses, take her children with her, and leave that lunatic for good.
I loved your poem at the beginning and can see the appeal of the mountains for you. What a great contrast to the evil you have found in the world of man. - Jim
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Thank you i'm glad you like my poem. I'm doubly glad and grateful to have you here too! I so appreciate your reviews I hope you know! I'm wishing you a wonderful christmas a great new year and an awesome evening!