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Resolution

Haibun

16 total reviews 
Comment from Douglas Goff
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Poppies in the field don't wish to be roses. Nor do Dobermans wish to be poodles. It is a great lesson in life to be content with oneself.

Bruce Lee once said, " Always talk good about yourself. Even if you're joking around, because your mind doesn't know the difference." Made sense to me.

Great piece. You are a survivor my friend. And for that, you will always be top notch to me.

Blessings.
Douglas

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Douglass, you always make me feel good about myself. Writing is the only thing that I like about me.

    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review.

    Big hugs, my friend. I hope 2024 brings you, health, prosperity, and love.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, Happy New Year. I think that you have a great resolution to love yourself. You've been through a lot, but you continue to spread sunshine.

I especially liked:
poppies in the field
don't wish to be roses --

(Exactly. We should all love ourselves for the way that we are and for the way that God made us.)

Well done. Love the photo. Xo. M

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thank you, my dear friend. Happy 2024!!!! I appreciate your kind review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Navada
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Thank you so much for sharing this. The reference to poppies and roses and the innate understanding that each has their own separate and vital role to play is a beautiful metaphor. Wishing you all the best for 2024 and the continuation of your lovely writing and artwork. :)

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thank you, my dear friend. Happy 2024!!!! I appreciate your kind review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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i should make that resolution lol
but finally got a therapist... so things are looking up lol

great haibun - love the concluding haiku! roses are so overrated LOL

thank you for sharing and good luck on your resolution!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thank you, my dear friend. Happy 2024!!!! I appreciate your kind review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from w.j.debi
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What an excellent and difficult goal for the new year. May you achieve it beautifully. You're such an excellent writer that it is hard to imagine you struggling, but we all have many facets to our lives. Thank you for sharing. It shows how human you are.
The haiku is worth pondering. Poppies are beautiful and have no need to compare themselves to roses. Hard to realize that sometimes.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thank you, my dear friend. Happy 2024!!!! I appreciate your kind review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm so proud of you and your resolution, especially that you pray to God for His guidance. May He show you how much He loves you and sees you perfect because He sees all of us through Jesus' work for us.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Helen. I wish I could see myself through God's eyes.

    Love you,

    MariVal
reply by lyenochka on 03-Jan-2024
    I get reminders of what He sees when I read the Bible, especially the New Testament. For example, 1 John 3:1
    "See what kind of love the Father has given to us, that we should be called children of God; "
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    John the apostal gospel is my favorite.

    Thank you very much, big sister. I'm praying to God and telling myself kind things when I look in the mirror. I'm also catching myself when I tell myself something unkind.
reply by lyenochka on 03-Jan-2024
    Great! John's a poetic writer! No wonder you like him! I'm listening to the Old Testament but reading just one verse of John a night in different languages. It's fun. I'm sure you'd see the difference in Spanish. I love how in Spanish Jesus calls and doesn't 'knock at the door' In Revelation.