2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Brenda Strauser
Beautiful picture. Your words portray your feelings well. Well done. I enjoyed reading t
This. I also liked the portrayal of the guy and girl. Great job
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Beautiful picture. Your words portray your feelings well. Well done. I enjoyed reading t
This. I also liked the portrayal of the guy and girl. Great job
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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8Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautifully written romance Tanka, Gypsy. The gift of love is indeed the greatest gift of all. I love the colours you've used in tour presentation. Just beautiful .
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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This is a beautifully written romance Tanka, Gypsy. The gift of love is indeed the greatest gift of all. I love the colours you've used in tour presentation. Just beautiful .
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Valda. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Is that lilac, Gypsy? Loved the sensual nature and fluidity of this free verse and its theme of love, passion and unity, blended with scents, gentle sounds, aromas and much more. I wondered if you meant: your soul s(l)ipped into mine? Well done on this excellent post. Debbie
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Is that lilac, Gypsy? Loved the sensual nature and fluidity of this free verse and its theme of love, passion and unity, blended with scents, gentle sounds, aromas and much more. I wondered if you meant: your soul s(l)ipped into mine? Well done on this excellent post. Debbie
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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yes, I think it's lilac. Thank you for catching that mistake 😊
Thank you very much, Debbie. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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You're welcome.