Spectre
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Comment from BethShelby
You seem both satisfiied that you suspicions are confirmed by what you are reading and sad and hurt by what you read as now you feel there was nothing you could have done from the beginning have changed things. I was evident you mother was capable of dealing with a child in her life. At the same time, you know nothing was you fault. You reaction to her behavior was natural. I think getting your book out will make a difference
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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You seem both satisfiied that you suspicions are confirmed by what you are reading and sad and hurt by what you read as now you feel there was nothing you could have done from the beginning have changed things. I was evident you mother was capable of dealing with a child in her life. At the same time, you know nothing was you fault. You reaction to her behavior was natural. I think getting your book out will make a difference
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Events I appreciate that I'm hoping to make a difference I'm hoping it makes a difference in children's lives so that they don't fall through the cracks again. Thank you again for your review thanks so much for your time and for your friendship I hope you have a great day!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is the kind of chapter that feels like things are wrapping up or reaching some kind of half-resolution. I am not sure why there is a font showing up that looks more like hand-writing than typing.
I would suggest going back and checking capital letters for every question in dialogue (quotation marks) such as:
"well then why is your signature on the paperwork? on all three reports you signed, your husband signed, we signed."
"Well, then, why is your signature on the paperwork? On all three reports you signed, your husband signed, we signed."
"they must have forced me," my mother said.
"They must have forced me," my mother said.
At least she admitted for three seconds that her mothering was "shitty." I wonder if the social workers had a tendency to write the same comments on most of their paperwork with other children. But you would have an impossible task to prove that.
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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This is the kind of chapter that feels like things are wrapping up or reaching some kind of half-resolution. I am not sure why there is a font showing up that looks more like hand-writing than typing.
I would suggest going back and checking capital letters for every question in dialogue (quotation marks) such as:
"well then why is your signature on the paperwork? on all three reports you signed, your husband signed, we signed."
"Well, then, why is your signature on the paperwork? On all three reports you signed, your husband signed, we signed."
"they must have forced me," my mother said.
"They must have forced me," my mother said.
At least she admitted for three seconds that her mothering was "shitty." I wonder if the social workers had a tendency to write the same comments on most of their paperwork with other children. But you would have an impossible task to prove that.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Hi thank you so much for reading my name gold would be to shine a light on social services so that no children would have to go through what I went through and that no more would fall through the cracks. I did see those errors and I corrected them thank you very much for that as you know these things are gold to me and I appreciate them being pointed out and I appreciate you too I really hope your day is the best!
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That would be awesome, to see an entire generation of children who didn't have to go through horror.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
I can't imagine having to grow up in a home where my mother didn't love me. I don't understand why she didn't just put you up for adoption if she didn't want you. As far as the police or social services go, it appears as if they don't want to expose the mistakes they made or perhaps they can't risk admitting to those mistakes if they believe that the matter will be revealed in court, in which case the lawyers would probably advise against admitting any wrong doing. What a life you've had gal. Do you have any plans after the lawsuit and book publishing? Are you going to try to put it behind you and look forward, or is that not a possibility? Just curious. With your love of fishing, maybe you should buy a boat and start taking people fishing for hire. Anyway, thanks for sharing this gal. I hope this is going to accomplish what you wish for.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Hello Lea,
I can't imagine having to grow up in a home where my mother didn't love me. I don't understand why she didn't just put you up for adoption if she didn't want you. As far as the police or social services go, it appears as if they don't want to expose the mistakes they made or perhaps they can't risk admitting to those mistakes if they believe that the matter will be revealed in court, in which case the lawyers would probably advise against admitting any wrong doing. What a life you've had gal. Do you have any plans after the lawsuit and book publishing? Are you going to try to put it behind you and look forward, or is that not a possibility? Just curious. With your love of fishing, maybe you should buy a boat and start taking people fishing for hire. Anyway, thanks for sharing this gal. I hope this is going to accomplish what you wish for.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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The ultimate goal is to shine a light on social services so that no children like myself could fall through the cracks I hope that it comes across the people that lessons to learn and things to watch out for and to avoid in the future. Once the books are written and on the shelf I am done I wash my hands of it turn my back and walk away enjoy the rest of my days fishing and crafting jewelry and giving readings. Thank you I appreciate you asking and caring enough to do so I appreciate your review thank you again I hope your day is great!
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That sounds like a healthy thing to do gal. You're still young enough to enjoy life, so go enjoy it doing things you enjoy, all too soon age creeps in and we can't do what we used to.