Within My World
A little about me42 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
Debi, One of the things I like about the poem is the cursive font you chose. It somehow flows with the rhymes that make it more upbeat and very Debish. Debish is new a term. The point is, the poem most definitely sounds like you and the presentation completes the picture. Very well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Debi, One of the things I like about the poem is the cursive font you chose. It somehow flows with the rhymes that make it more upbeat and very Debish. Debish is new a term. The point is, the poem most definitely sounds like you and the presentation completes the picture. Very well done. Terry.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Terry, you are so dang sweet. Thank you for the kindest comments. I love the word Debish, but love even more when I shock you by doing something that is not so debish. Haha! Thanks again, my awesome friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Aaron Milavec
The picture fits the mood and content of your life. Your poetry presents a life both blessed and cursed. Yet, all is well with Jesus and with FanStory.
Pain-free and world-wide usually require a hyphen when functioning as an adjective.
You script is pleasing and presents your poem more like a written autobiography.
Peace and joy,
Aaron
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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The picture fits the mood and content of your life. Your poetry presents a life both blessed and cursed. Yet, all is well with Jesus and with FanStory.
Pain-free and world-wide usually require a hyphen when functioning as an adjective.
You script is pleasing and presents your poem more like a written autobiography.
Peace and joy,
Aaron
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Aaron, I can't thank you enough for catching what should have been a no brainer for me. Kind of a DUH moment for me. Feedback is my favorite part of this place so thank you so much. Also thanks for the kind comments.
Love, Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
Your lovely poem is very endearing. It was nice to learn more about you through your story. We are used to reading the stories of others through your poetry. I'm glad you shared yours. Thank you for giving us a better glimpse of you.
Very nicely done. Maybe one of your best.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Your lovely poem is very endearing. It was nice to learn more about you through your story. We are used to reading the stories of others through your poetry. I'm glad you shared yours. Thank you for giving us a better glimpse of you.
Very nicely done. Maybe one of your best.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Janet, I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem Debi. So happy you are a part of fan story. You add so much to this site. Beautiful overall presentation background and font . Love your photo choice as well.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem Debi. So happy you are a part of fan story. You add so much to this site. Beautiful overall presentation background and font . Love your photo choice as well.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Joanne, i?m not sure I?m going to be able to wait to write your poem until August. You just make me want to write one right now for you. So once again I cannot thank you enough for such a lovely review and words for my world poem. I am truly honored by them, as well as your six stars. You are such a special and beautiful woman and I appreciate you so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
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Your kindly welcome
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I so admire your determination to get up every day and go about your life. I know you are - have been - in pain, and I know how that can fight against focus. But you're a determined lady.
I love your poem, and I thank you for sharing what is "within your world".
xxoo
Pam
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I so admire your determination to get up every day and go about your life. I know you are - have been - in pain, and I know how that can fight against focus. But you're a determined lady.
I love your poem, and I thank you for sharing what is "within your world".
xxoo
Pam
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Pam, I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hi Debi, I wish I had a six, your presentation and your metaphors are to die for:) You got me from the first lines which fully resonate with my soul:"Within my world of poetry
I'll find my creativity
The space I'm in for me is key,
Where I can leave reality". Well done:)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Hi Debi, I wish I had a six, your presentation and your metaphors are to die for:) You got me from the first lines which fully resonate with my soul:"Within my world of poetry
I'll find my creativity
The space I'm in for me is key,
Where I can leave reality". Well done:)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Hi Iza, I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I don't know about you Debi but I find it hard to write specifically about me. But, you've done well telling us about your life, your loves and your health battles. I agree fan story is a great place to be.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I don't know about you Debi but I find it hard to write specifically about me. But, you've done well telling us about your life, your loves and your health battles. I agree fan story is a great place to be.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Hi Valda I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem.
Comment from LJbutterfly
You show so much love and kindness to members of our FanStory family, by getting to know them, writing poetry for their birthday, and knowing when they are experiencing difficult times, that I am glad you are sharing a bit about yourself.
I find this poem especially inspiring because I know Lupus tries to steal and destroy. However, through all of your challenges, you demonstrate a unique glory that has been placed upon you and we all experience your gifts as we read your poetry. Since you joined this family in 2021, you have been a blessing to us all.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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You show so much love and kindness to members of our FanStory family, by getting to know them, writing poetry for their birthday, and knowing when they are experiencing difficult times, that I am glad you are sharing a bit about yourself.
I find this poem especially inspiring because I know Lupus tries to steal and destroy. However, through all of your challenges, you demonstrate a unique glory that has been placed upon you and we all experience your gifts as we read your poetry. Since you joined this family in 2021, you have been a blessing to us all.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Lorraine, I cannot thank you enough for such a lovely review and words for my world. I am truly honored by them, as well as your six stars. You are such a special and beautiful woman and I appreciate you so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Frank Malley
Debi Pique Marquette has written a six stanza rhyming poem that celebrates her goals, her family, her writing, and her friends on FS. She also asserts that illness won't undermine all the plusses (spelling?) in her life. And lastly, she makes a positive statement about the role of God in her life.
This poet's tone is universally positive. She even finds good interpretations for the suffering and difficulties life sometimes presents. She has a radiant spirit.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Debi Pique Marquette has written a six stanza rhyming poem that celebrates her goals, her family, her writing, and her friends on FS. She also asserts that illness won't undermine all the plusses (spelling?) in her life. And lastly, she makes a positive statement about the role of God in her life.
This poet's tone is universally positive. She even finds good interpretations for the suffering and difficulties life sometimes presents. She has a radiant spirit.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Frank. I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments. Your compliment at the end of your review meant the world to me. Your friend, Debi.
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning dearest Debi,
I'M BACK... ha ha ha
We will see how long that lasts but it does feel so good to be reading reviewing and writing..only a few hours today...still finding it difficult...because of the pain.
Anyway, I just LOVE this poem of yours.
I hope you are organising your poems and that you plan to publish them?
A million hugs...thank you so much for your ongoing support,
Lisa
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Good morning dearest Debi,
I'M BACK... ha ha ha
We will see how long that lasts but it does feel so good to be reading reviewing and writing..only a few hours today...still finding it difficult...because of the pain.
Anyway, I just LOVE this poem of yours.
I hope you are organising your poems and that you plan to publish them?
A million hugs...thank you so much for your ongoing support,
Lisa
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Oh how funny this is, that I just got done reviewing your free verse and popped over here and you were here. Thanks so much for this lovely review and words for my World. You are so sweet, and it is so good to see you writing again.
It is only 7AM here so I may have misunderstood yours, but it did take me to a bad place, but your poem was great.
I do understand the pain completely and I thought I would go out of my mind since there was nothing they could give me. My knees still hurt but the worst for me is where they built up the bones in my legs and straightened them. But don't be discouraged as it is still so much better than before the surgery.
But it takes a while. Not like my husband who had both hips done at the same time I was having my knees and legs, was feeling better in a month. And he never had any therapy.
Thanks again for your kind words and for always being your kind self. Hope you are reading the reviews of yours. Did you find them ok?