Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Journey "This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like these kind of arrangement. Starting with a beautiful poem written to describe the colorful photo, then you told us the present time. The bold letters were about the past that was amazingly similar or different than the present. It's about a "New Beginning."
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I like these kind of arrangement. Starting with a beautiful poem written to describe the colorful photo, then you told us the present time. The bold letters were about the past that was amazingly similar or different than the present. It's about a "New Beginning."
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Jasmine that's a fine compliment I'm so happy you like it! Thank you too for reading I'm so happy to see you here you have an excellent eye for words which comes out in everything you do including your reviews so thank you very much I'm glad you like it!
Comment from Jim Wile
This was such a beautifully written chapter, Lea. I'm so happy that you've found your happy place and that you will be living there now--far from your old life and past troubles. It sounds like you are on the verge of really flourishing now and leaving your past behind except in the well-chosen words of your memoir. You can look forward to your days and not have to dwell in your past any longer except when you want to for purposes of finishing your story.
In your story now, you were euphoric for the promise of an exciting new life with a man you seemed to be crazy about, and you left with good feelings. You've given us a sense of foreboding, however, making us fear for another sad adventure in your life. You're building up the sense of this very slowly and skillfully.
It sounds like you're the kind of person who commits wholly to new directions in your life, which is a good thing. It's the only way to achieve the goals you set for yourself. I wish you the very best of luck in your new life now. - Jim
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This was such a beautifully written chapter, Lea. I'm so happy that you've found your happy place and that you will be living there now--far from your old life and past troubles. It sounds like you are on the verge of really flourishing now and leaving your past behind except in the well-chosen words of your memoir. You can look forward to your days and not have to dwell in your past any longer except when you want to for purposes of finishing your story.
In your story now, you were euphoric for the promise of an exciting new life with a man you seemed to be crazy about, and you left with good feelings. You've given us a sense of foreboding, however, making us fear for another sad adventure in your life. You're building up the sense of this very slowly and skillfully.
It sounds like you're the kind of person who commits wholly to new directions in your life, which is a good thing. It's the only way to achieve the goals you set for yourself. I wish you the very best of luck in your new life now. - Jim
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Jim once again thank you so much for your kind review this wonderful rating and for your unique perspective I appreciate so very much! Thank you again my friend it's hard to convey how much I am grateful for everyone here on fan story you being a big part of that so again thanks so much I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a watershed moment in your life both your present and your child's. And I can sense the apprehension mixed with excitement in the latter. Characteristically, there is this sweet gratitude for the hospitality you've received, as though surprised by what fate has offered. Wary of this grown-up relationship, you're, of course, willing to take the plunge. We sense the stars haven't exactly aligned for you but you're in for the ride. All the very best in your new home which sounds perfect for you and totally idyllic. I would love to see some of your creations sometime:) Small edits: temp(e)rature; showing off a new way to give people the finger (an errant 'we'); slipped between the covers (of) what would be.. Good luck, Lea, in both lives! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is a watershed moment in your life both your present and your child's. And I can sense the apprehension mixed with excitement in the latter. Characteristically, there is this sweet gratitude for the hospitality you've received, as though surprised by what fate has offered. Wary of this grown-up relationship, you're, of course, willing to take the plunge. We sense the stars haven't exactly aligned for you but you're in for the ride. All the very best in your new home which sounds perfect for you and totally idyllic. I would love to see some of your creations sometime:) Small edits: temp(e)rature; showing off a new way to give people the finger (an errant 'we'); slipped between the covers (of) what would be.. Good luck, Lea, in both lives! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Debbie appreciate that so much what a wonderful review and some awesome things you always say make me smile! I'll talk more about the place and provide pictures and where we're at with that for sure! Times change everything do they not my childhood recently gone I move on to become an adult in every way. Thank you again my friend I appreciate you as you know I'm happy to see you here!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
No relationship is perfect but we weigh up the pros and cons as we are imperfect beings ourselves. Your emotions are full of anticipation and wonder here Lea as you start out on your new adult life. I also wish you luck in your new home and hope that you can have some peace and break from the trauma of your past. Keep your address secret and fade away from those who have harmed you, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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No relationship is perfect but we weigh up the pros and cons as we are imperfect beings ourselves. Your emotions are full of anticipation and wonder here Lea as you start out on your new adult life. I also wish you luck in your new home and hope that you can have some peace and break from the trauma of your past. Keep your address secret and fade away from those who have harmed you, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Very good advice Dolly thank you so much! Yes only those pertinent legal people will have my location well as my one sister but that is all. It'll be a fine place to live by beautiful Lake in a small community which still has amenities. Thanks again for your kindness your wonderful review your time and your excellent insight!
Comment from Barry Penfold
I am sure your future will bloom. It does appear to be a wonderful place you are moving to and everything in your past and present has led to where you are now. Look forward to hearing more of the adventure.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I am sure your future will bloom. It does appear to be a wonderful place you are moving to and everything in your past and present has led to where you are now. Look forward to hearing more of the adventure.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Barry I appreciate you stopping in and reading you're welcome to read the previous book and chapters if you wish I can be found in my portfolio I'm sure you know. I appreciate your kindness your time your fine review and rating thanks again Barry I hope you have the best day!