The Foxes and the Golfers
A Story Poem in Sestets13 total reviews
Comment from Wy Jung
Well done. Quite a challenge. Because I am not familiar with the sestet scheme, I cannot critique to the effectiveness of the piece with the parameters, but from what I can decipher you nailed it. Also like the addition of the end explaining "Shenanigan" ...I never knew that!
Those tricky foxes. Always keeping humans on their toes. Cheers.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Well done. Quite a challenge. Because I am not familiar with the sestet scheme, I cannot critique to the effectiveness of the piece with the parameters, but from what I can decipher you nailed it. Also like the addition of the end explaining "Shenanigan" ...I never knew that!
Those tricky foxes. Always keeping humans on their toes. Cheers.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you Wy Jung, for reading and reviewing my story. I am pleased you enjoyed the fox shenanigans. Have a great day.
Comment from damommy
I really enjoyed the story of Tod and his golf ball collection. The golfers didn't stand a chance with a family of foxes to protect their young. Great rhyme. I'd like to see more stories written like this.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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I really enjoyed the story of Tod and his golf ball collection. The golfers didn't stand a chance with a family of foxes to protect their young. Great rhyme. I'd like to see more stories written like this.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much damommy, for reading and reviewing my work. I am glad you enjoyed my foxes and Todd.s antics. I appreciate the star rating as well. God bless.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun story, inventive and a joy to read, loved the rhymes and the humour within and the playful fox had some fun here in your clever and witty story, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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A fun story, inventive and a joy to read, loved the rhymes and the humour within and the playful fox had some fun here in your clever and witty story, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you Dolly for your review and comments. It was a fun write. So glad you enjoyed it.