2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
My goodness, you have such glorious pictures. I love this Grammarly. I can write really fast sometimes, and when I do the words sometimes intertangle. Your poetry is lovely. Do you have a publisher for you book? Good work here. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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My goodness, you have such glorious pictures. I love this Grammarly. I can write really fast sometimes, and when I do the words sometimes intertangle. Your poetry is lovely. Do you have a publisher for you book? Good work here. Karen
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen 😊 I published two books in Amazon. I don't have the time now.
Gypsy hugs
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I am busy here too, I am getting all my writing onto word and printing it up as well. My printer lost it's mind. I also want to make a contest. I thought maybe I would have people kill me. They could do it with kindness, or a steamroller. Maybe have me get entangled in my support hose, and have me hurdle down the stairs, anything. But it must make me laugh. Do you think anyone would sign up? Would you like to have a whack at me? Poem or story. :-) Karen
Comment from Wy Jung
Beautiful. ..as usual Gypsy. I'm learning yet another poetry form from having your work come across for review. Succinct and the word imagery is strong. I don't see anything to improve here.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Beautiful. ..as usual Gypsy. I'm learning yet another poetry form from having your work come across for review. Succinct and the word imagery is strong. I don't see anything to improve here.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, WY Jung 😊
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Seashells bring lots of beauty to writing and images. Your poem is written with very lovely, colorful images that are stunning. If you hold a seashell onto the ear, it will make wave sounds.
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Seashells bring lots of beauty to writing and images. Your poem is written with very lovely, colorful images that are stunning. If you hold a seashell onto the ear, it will make wave sounds.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Rosemary 😊
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Comment from lyenochka
I love the way you show us love that is eternal and how everything comes together for those who are with their beloved one. All time stops and there's romance even among the sea and sky and breeze.
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I love the way you show us love that is eternal and how everything comes together for those who are with their beloved one. All time stops and there's romance even among the sea and sky and breeze.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Yes! You got it. 😊 thank you big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from jim vecchio
My heart cannot take in such beauty as your words and graphics convey. You sure make it hard for a wannabe like me! Japanese poetry is always enticing, but when you're the writer, it is doubly so!
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My heart cannot take in such beauty as your words and graphics convey. You sure make it hard for a wannabe like me! Japanese poetry is always enticing, but when you're the writer, it is doubly so!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Jim 😊 I appropriate your exceptional six stars review.
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If anyone deserves it, you do!