Never Say Never
A girl believes romance will never come her way.28 total reviews
Comment from Annmuma
What a great entry for the contest! I haven't read all of the entries, but so far, you've got my vote. Good luck. I found myself wishing this was just the first chapter and I would have an opportunity to learn more. ann
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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What a great entry for the contest! I haven't read all of the entries, but so far, you've got my vote. Good luck. I found myself wishing this was just the first chapter and I would have an opportunity to learn more. ann
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much. A lot of people have mentioned wishing it would continue. I'll give it some thought.
Beth
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is very interesting. I have been working on my story for some time, but romance is not my bailiwick.
It is fighting me every step of the way. I usually kill someone off or have someone get tangled up in their drooping panty-hose and fall into a grave. Not the tone I want to set. Good work here. Karen
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is very interesting. I have been working on my story for some time, but romance is not my bailiwick.
It is fighting me every step of the way. I usually kill someone off or have someone get tangled up in their drooping panty-hose and fall into a grave. Not the tone I want to set. Good work here. Karen
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you Karen, This is first romance I've tried to write that wasn't non-fiction. I stuggle with fiction. I need a real person. I appreciate the nice review.
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Well, I tried to write a straight romance, and it just would not behave. I am afraid I have been bad again! haha "my secret love" karen
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Beth,
I truly enjoyed your romance story! I was into it a bit before I realized it wasn't part of your books. lol, I was trying to figure out who Emily was to you. Relative or not, I enjoyed your love at first sight story. Emily was off enjoying her life as a single lady when she finally met her "someone for everyone."
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Hi Beth,
I truly enjoyed your romance story! I was into it a bit before I realized it wasn't part of your books. lol, I was trying to figure out who Emily was to you. Relative or not, I enjoyed your love at first sight story. Emily was off enjoying her life as a single lady when she finally met her "someone for everyone."
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you Rhonda. I don't often write fiction so I was trying my hand at something I do often. I appriciate the review and nice comments.
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It was great!
Comment from Navada
I could really resonate with Emily and her desire not to do things the things others do. I've never had the slightest interest in the dating scene - I think it's so dangerous and superficial.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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I could really resonate with Emily and her desire not to do things the things others do. I've never had the slightest interest in the dating scene - I think it's so dangerous and superficial.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the review. I have a granddaughter like Emily. I just want her to be happy. She is getting out ane seeing the world.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
A delightful and well-written story, and a fine romance. Sometimes it just takes time to find the right one, and "You can't hurry love" as the song goes. Sending you very best wishes for the Romance contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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A delightful and well-written story, and a fine romance. Sometimes it just takes time to find the right one, and "You can't hurry love" as the song goes. Sending you very best wishes for the Romance contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you Wendy. I really appreciate the review and comments. You are right. You can't hurry love.
Beth
Comment from mermaids
This is great. This young lady's life was pretty good before she met Mr. Right but I like how the story ends up. It is true. You never know who you are going to meet. Excellent writing with good character development and flow of story that hold's the reader's interest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is great. This young lady's life was pretty good before she met Mr. Right but I like how the story ends up. It is true. You never know who you are going to meet. Excellent writing with good character development and flow of story that hold's the reader's interest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for the nice review and comments.
Beth
Comment from patcelaw
This is a well written story, and I enjoyed listening to it. It just points out one thing that we mother sometimes need to be very careful about who we set our children up with. Our children most times have better understanding than we have of them. Patricia.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is a well written story, and I enjoyed listening to it. It just points out one thing that we mother sometimes need to be very careful about who we set our children up with. Our children most times have better understanding than we have of them. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you Partricia. I'm glae you liked this. Yes everyone who sets someone up on a date should be careful and make sure they know the person well.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I've checked out labs in some of the COUNTRIES I've visited.
What's the old saying? Love arrives when you stop looking for it? Fate was waiting for the right time to hook these two up:-)
This was an entertaining story, Beth. Believable with great conversation and hope for a bright future for Emily and Brian.
Nicely done.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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I've checked out labs in some of the COUNTRIES I've visited.
What's the old saying? Love arrives when you stop looking for it? Fate was waiting for the right time to hook these two up:-)
This was an entertaining story, Beth. Believable with great conversation and hope for a bright future for Emily and Brian.
Nicely done.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you Pam, I'm glad you found this entertaining and believable. Thanks for the lovely six stars and for pointing out the missing R in countries.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautiful romantic story and we never know when someone will walk into our life and the magic happened to this fine young lady here, I love happy endings Beth and I enjoyed your entertaining post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is a beautiful romantic story and we never know when someone will walk into our life and the magic happened to this fine young lady here, I love happy endings Beth and I enjoyed your entertaining post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you Dolly, I'm so glad you like my romantic story. I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Jeano
Well, once again, you've set the bar high for a contest. I loved this story, not because of the obvious, but because I'm a firm believer in love comes along unexpectedly in unexpected places. It just happens. Well done, as usual. Good luck with this contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Well, once again, you've set the bar high for a contest. I loved this story, not because of the obvious, but because I'm a firm believer in love comes along unexpectedly in unexpected places. It just happens. Well done, as usual. Good luck with this contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Thank you Jeano. I agree. You never know when love might find you. I seem to happen more often when you aren't even looking for it. I appreciate the comments.