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Beyond The Reach Of Time45 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
A moving poem of sustained grief after the tragic loss of a loved one. Your poem is in perfect rhythm, both poetically and in terms of the topic. My condolences.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A moving poem of sustained grief after the tragic loss of a loved one. Your poem is in perfect rhythm, both poetically and in terms of the topic. My condolences.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much. That means the world.
Xo
Comment from nomi338
The message is clear, whether near or far away, love survives, does not go away. While it may one day be replaced by another, the memory of how it made you feel, is much harder to expel.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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The message is clear, whether near or far away, love survives, does not go away. While it may one day be replaced by another, the memory of how it made you feel, is much harder to expel.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend. xo
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
It's sad when someone's significant half dies ,
Sure life goes on but it becomes dull and meaningless for many.
The sun doesn't warm their heart anymore
sunset doesn't make them smile anymore
the stars don't sparkle anymore
A lover just looses the lust for life without the one they love.
It's not everyone's cup of tea but by nature I'm gloomy so I enjoyed the melancholic vibe.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Ciao!
It's sad when someone's significant half dies ,
Sure life goes on but it becomes dull and meaningless for many.
The sun doesn't warm their heart anymore
sunset doesn't make them smile anymore
the stars don't sparkle anymore
A lover just looses the lust for life without the one they love.
It's not everyone's cup of tea but by nature I'm gloomy so I enjoyed the melancholic vibe.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend, for this lovely review!!
xo
Comment from Mia Twysted
A very moving piece. You can feel the love and longing that one has for the soul that they are missing. Always having their memory there with them they are carried around on the journey.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A very moving piece. You can feel the love and longing that one has for the soul that they are missing. Always having their memory there with them they are carried around on the journey.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, mia xo
Comment from jake cosmos aller
great tribute to a lost love one on her birthday. I like the cursive format as well as the picture which nicely complements the poem. Profound, moving tribute of love
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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great tribute to a lost love one on her birthday. I like the cursive format as well as the picture which nicely complements the poem. Profound, moving tribute of love
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend xo
Comment from Michael Cassar
I am touched with the opening five words...Beyond The Reach of Time". Words echoing throughout the poem hold your attention to the writer's pain and spark one's feelings to embrace the writer to exude and inspire comfort. The writer ends with self-supporting words. Great touchy and sensitive poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I am touched with the opening five words...Beyond The Reach of Time". Words echoing throughout the poem hold your attention to the writer's pain and spark one's feelings to embrace the writer to exude and inspire comfort. The writer ends with self-supporting words. Great touchy and sensitive poem.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much
xo
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My pleasure
Comment from LJbutterfly
Oh my God! This poem is filled with so much emotion, pain, and love. The message is powerful as you describe how ordinary everything remains and appears, except for a broken heart that still beats, and loving memories.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Oh my God! This poem is filled with so much emotion, pain, and love. The message is powerful as you describe how ordinary everything remains and appears, except for a broken heart that still beats, and loving memories.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend!!! xo
Comment from Janet Foor
A sad yet beautiful poem. Beautifully written with love and longing in each line.
Your Happy birthday poem to Kiki is emotional and filled with tenderness.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A sad yet beautiful poem. Beautifully written with love and longing in each line.
Your Happy birthday poem to Kiki is emotional and filled with tenderness.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Janet, I cant tell you what that means to me. Thank you so much, my friend.
xo
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is absolutely beautiful. I can sure relate this I have had a number of loss in my family the past three years. This sure hits home for me. Beautiful job. Lovely picture to compliment your words as well.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is absolutely beautiful. I can sure relate this I have had a number of loss in my family the past three years. This sure hits home for me. Beautiful job. Lovely picture to compliment your words as well.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Joanne. Your words mean the world to me. I am so sorry for your losses, truly. xo
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Your very welcome
Comment from Boogienights
This is incredibly beautiful and sad. I wish l could write poetry with such deep feeling, l could feel the despair. Your rhyming is on point, l really enjoyed reading this. :)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is incredibly beautiful and sad. I wish l could write poetry with such deep feeling, l could feel the despair. Your rhyming is on point, l really enjoyed reading this. :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend. Xoxo means the world!!