The Crucifixion in Black & White
1,000 words. The last day of our Savior's life.16 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Although this was probably not the day on which the Lord was sacrificed so cruelly 2,000 years ago, we celebrate it anyway, this is beautifully written my friend, re-enacting the journey to the Cross and through it, beautifully written Mike, happy Easter, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
Although this was probably not the day on which the Lord was sacrificed so cruelly 2,000 years ago, we celebrate it anyway, this is beautifully written my friend, re-enacting the journey to the Cross and through it, beautifully written Mike, happy Easter, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Happy Resurrection Day!
mike
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You too
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a sad yet inevitable part of the story of Christ. He was abandoned by all, friends and believers. There was no chance things could go any other way. I thank him for his sacrifice. Without him, we would be nothing. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
This was such a sad yet inevitable part of the story of Christ. He was abandoned by all, friends and believers. There was no chance things could go any other way. I thank him for his sacrifice. Without him, we would be nothing. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Hi, Gretchen. Thank you for your kind words!
Happy Resurrection Day!
mike
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this story for at Easter. I enjoyed reading. I have often wondered if I would have been one of the bystanders who wanted Him put to death. I truly hope not.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
Thank you for sharing this story for at Easter. I enjoyed reading. I have often wondered if I would have been one of the bystanders who wanted Him put to death. I truly hope not.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Hi, Barbara. Thank you for your kind words!
Happy Resurrection Day!
mike
Comment from Teri7
Mike, This was a very well written story about the last days of our Saviors life. We owe our all to Him! He paid a price that no one will ever pay in the way our Savior did. May God bless you and Happy Resurrection Day! Teri
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
Mike, This was a very well written story about the last days of our Saviors life. We owe our all to Him! He paid a price that no one will ever pay in the way our Savior did. May God bless you and Happy Resurrection Day! Teri
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Hi, Teri. I'm so glad you stopped by to read. Thank you for your kind words and shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Happy Resurrection Day!
mike
Comment from estory
I thought you did a great job pulling the reader in with this personal account of the crucifixion, and the emotion in the voice was something we can all relate to. The details in the story tug at our sense of compassion, our sense of guilt, our hope in the resurrection. There's so many mixed emotions here. By creating this roman soldier and using his perspective you have made a story in which we can see ourselves, much like the story of Ben Hur. estory
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
I thought you did a great job pulling the reader in with this personal account of the crucifixion, and the emotion in the voice was something we can all relate to. The details in the story tug at our sense of compassion, our sense of guilt, our hope in the resurrection. There's so many mixed emotions here. By creating this roman soldier and using his perspective you have made a story in which we can see ourselves, much like the story of Ben Hur. estory
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Happy Resurrection Day!
mike
Comment from Brett Matthew West
A behind the scenes look at the events that occurred on the most significant day in human history with some liberties taken.
To witness them occur firsthand would have been terrifying. To understand why they must fascinating.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
A behind the scenes look at the events that occurred on the most significant day in human history with some liberties taken.
To witness them occur firsthand would have been terrifying. To understand why they must fascinating.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Hi, Brett. I'm so glad you stopped by to read. Thank you for your kind words!
Happy Resurrection Day!
mike