Heavy The Head
My entry for the Minute Poetry contest13 total reviews
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I love the rhyme and flow of this poem! It shows a lot feeling, and was well written. I especially like the picture! It couldn't be any more perfect to go with the poem!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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I love the rhyme and flow of this poem! It shows a lot feeling, and was well written. I especially like the picture! It couldn't be any more perfect to go with the poem!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your beautiful minute verse also reminds me of Ophelia in Hamlet. It's skilfully composed with great poignancy and weight of meaning resting on the imagery of daffodils. Thank you so much for sharing this assured winner:) Good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Your beautiful minute verse also reminds me of Ophelia in Hamlet. It's skilfully composed with great poignancy and weight of meaning resting on the imagery of daffodils. Thank you so much for sharing this assured winner:) Good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This Minute poem has sad sentiments. I am glad you were inspired by Shakespeare to write this too. Good luck with the contest.
Just one suggestion for this line:
(She's now (too) cold)
Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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This Minute poem has sad sentiments. I am glad you were inspired by Shakespeare to write this too. Good luck with the contest.
Just one suggestion for this line:
(She's now (too) cold)
Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! I'll fix that.