2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from shelley kaye
you did well with your experiment
smooth flow with romantic imagery
love the last 3 lines!
I feel the urge to kiss you
and the waves agree with me
flowing in and out with the tides
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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you did well with your experiment
smooth flow with romantic imagery
love the last 3 lines!
I feel the urge to kiss you
and the waves agree with me
flowing in and out with the tides
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I love my husband dearly but if a man came around and thought this way about me, he'd be gone in a second. LOL I can dream, can't I? This is the stuff dreams are made of. I enjoyed reading.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I love my husband dearly but if a man came around and thought this way about me, he'd be gone in a second. LOL I can dream, can't I? This is the stuff dreams are made of. I enjoyed reading.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
I think it is a fun thing to do just see if we can write something from the point of view of another whether it be a man or or another person entirely your poem is very well done and I enjoyed it. Have a good day and God bless.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I think it is a fun thing to do just see if we can write something from the point of view of another whether it be a man or or another person entirely your poem is very well done and I enjoyed it. Have a good day and God bless.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome.