Willing Hearts
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Comment from Wendy G
In my mind, Sami should not have told Noah the results of the pregnancy test but left it for Bob and Sarah to let him know. So all these illegal immigrants are just now starting to arrive sfter more than three weeks with none? Did they not know this was a potential pkace for illegal immigrants when they set it up as a safety house. I am a bit surprised about this sudden turn of events. But the chapter is a well written and interesting one.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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In my mind, Sami should not have told Noah the results of the pregnancy test but left it for Bob and Sarah to let him know. So all these illegal immigrants are just now starting to arrive sfter more than three weeks with none? Did they not know this was a potential pkace for illegal immigrants when they set it up as a safety house. I am a bit surprised about this sudden turn of events. But the chapter is a well written and interesting one.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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In Texas there are all kinds of hot spots because of the amount crossing. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I saw no problems in your writing. You have gotten everyone involved in a plan should illegal aliens try to enter their area. But is there any reason so many would enter this area now when no one passed through in the previous 20 days or so?
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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I saw no problems in your writing. You have gotten everyone involved in a plan should illegal aliens try to enter their area. But is there any reason so many would enter this area now when no one passed through in the previous 20 days or so?
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Just happened to be the direction they went. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Things are getting so much more complicated than simply rescuing Myra. Now we have a deep romance, a pregnant officer, and a bunch of migrants to have an encounter with the Texas DPS. Thanks for the info about the change in stats in border crossings.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Things are getting so much more complicated than simply rescuing Myra. Now we have a deep romance, a pregnant officer, and a bunch of migrants to have an encounter with the Texas DPS. Thanks for the info about the change in stats in border crossings.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Texas had to take care of it because our government would not.
Comment from judiverse
Glad someone is doing something about the illegal border crossings. I didn't know the mainstream media reported on them. Lots of action going on in this. I hope Sami doesn't do something to shake things up but follows Noah's directions. She does seem to be maturing a bit. I like her concern about Sarah and the pregnancy. Noah wants to protect Sarah, but he's also following protocol. Poor Jasper! He may not like having to be confined, if they have to get in the closet. You have a lot of things going on in this chapter, and you're bringing them together wonderfully. judi
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Glad someone is doing something about the illegal border crossings. I didn't know the mainstream media reported on them. Lots of action going on in this. I hope Sami doesn't do something to shake things up but follows Noah's directions. She does seem to be maturing a bit. I like her concern about Sarah and the pregnancy. Noah wants to protect Sarah, but he's also following protocol. Poor Jasper! He may not like having to be confined, if they have to get in the closet. You have a lot of things going on in this chapter, and you're bringing them together wonderfully. judi
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I choose a mainstream media report so the liberals on this site would understand. Of course, I had to really search for it.
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You're welcome. I'm sure you did have to search. Of course it came after the number of illegal border crossings decreased. Convenient it's happening at this election time. Great work with interweaving all your story elements. judi
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It took our governor that long to get it in place, because the Biden administration brought lawsuits, stating Texas was breaking the law.
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And Kamala Harris will follow the same policy. I heard a statement from her that she was in favor of the migrants getting health care and education just like citizens do. judi
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While many Americans suffer.
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So true.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice chapter, Barb. It looks like we are going to have some excitement. You have left the reader dangling, which is a good idea. We are anxiously awaiting your next installment.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Nice chapter, Barb. It looks like we are going to have some excitement. You have left the reader dangling, which is a good idea. We are anxiously awaiting your next installment.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
A well written chapter, lots dialogue where the readers get to 'listen in' and gather lots of needed information, some background, and confirmation of feelings, restrictions, and the reasoning behind them. Also, your characters are very open with each other.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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A well written chapter, lots dialogue where the readers get to 'listen in' and gather lots of needed information, some background, and confirmation of feelings, restrictions, and the reasoning behind them. Also, your characters are very open with each other.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Ooh, more intrigue and possible danger. The story is changing and introducing something new, different and dangerous. There is no way your critics can say that your story is boring or predictable. Anyone claiming this is just jealous and can be ignored.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Ooh, more intrigue and possible danger. The story is changing and introducing something new, different and dangerous. There is no way your critics can say that your story is boring or predictable. Anyone claiming this is just jealous and can be ignored.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. One does say my novels are the same, I just change the names. REALLY!!!
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Whoever sad tat that proves that they did not really read your novels. What they fail to realize is there are some types of behavior that are common in some types of people. Your critics should read more.
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I actually accused this person of doing that. LOL
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Smiles.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, I finally got a six star to give you! This is a really great chapter. A lot of great descriptive words and great dialogue too. I can't wait until the next one! I am getting excited about Noah and Sami and Jasper! Did you know I thought Jasper was a little tiny dog? love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Barbara, I finally got a six star to give you! This is a really great chapter. A lot of great descriptive words and great dialogue too. I can't wait until the next one! I am getting excited about Noah and Sami and Jasper! Did you know I thought Jasper was a little tiny dog? love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
With such a large group, wouldn't they likely try to break in a place that thought was abandoned?. It is good to know the border crossings are down. By Sarah reaction to being with Bob and coming in upset, it sounds like maybe he was happy with the news.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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With such a large group, wouldn't they likely try to break in a place that thought was abandoned?. It is good to know the border crossings are down. By Sarah reaction to being with Bob and coming in upset, it sounds like maybe he was happy with the news.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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True, but they were probably looking for food. Abandon places probably don't have any. I think he was. They'll comment on it later. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, another great chapter. So Sarah, is pregnant. I expected as much. Now who is coming towards them is the big question. Probably refugees from across the border. I'm looking forward to reading more. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Hi Barbara, another great chapter. So Sarah, is pregnant. I expected as much. Now who is coming towards them is the big question. Probably refugees from across the border. I'm looking forward to reading more. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing this kind review with us.