2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy------and about a subject I used to know, or at least I think I used to know, it was a long time ago, and I'm half asleep. Unless I just think I used to have what is the subject matter of the poem, and in reality I lived in my parents shed and spent all my time playing video games and eating corn dogs for breakfast!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy------and about a subject I used to know, or at least I think I used to know, it was a long time ago, and I'm half asleep. Unless I just think I used to have what is the subject matter of the poem, and in reality I lived in my parents shed and spent all my time playing video games and eating corn dogs for breakfast!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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LoL, I know how you feel.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very sensory-filled and exotic with your words and very mysterious and captivating with the attendant artwork. As always, Gypsy, a standout of a complete package. You always pay attention to every last detail. xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Very sensory-filled and exotic with your words and very mysterious and captivating with the attendant artwork. As always, Gypsy, a standout of a complete package. You always pay attention to every last detail. xoxo
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thougght your poem poem beautifully shares the moments shared together. Your word choices are perfect. I could sdee the embrace and the "warm caress". It's a tender poem that is so romantic. I really enjoyed the way you brought these moments to life!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I thougght your poem poem beautifully shares the moments shared together. Your word choices are perfect. I could sdee the embrace and the "warm caress". It's a tender poem that is so romantic. I really enjoyed the way you brought these moments to life!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
way cool pics!!
a great poem with imagistic word choices flowing smoothly through the night. . . and with rhyme, too!! ;-)
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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way cool pics!!
a great poem with imagistic word choices flowing smoothly through the night. . . and with rhyme, too!! ;-)
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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The rhyme was unintentional, I look for words with a good sound but I'm glad it worked out.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and it flows beautifully when Gretta loud I enjoyed it very much. Your presentation is beautiful as usual. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may you have a pleasant evening. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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This is very well written and it flows beautifully when Gretta loud I enjoyed it very much. Your presentation is beautiful as usual. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may you have a pleasant evening. Patricia.
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
The narrator seems to be realizing how much she's loved as the stars, and the crisp air of Fall, and the joyful song of doves all remind her of the Creator's warm embrace.
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The narrator seems to be realizing how much she's loved as the stars, and the crisp air of Fall, and the joyful song of doves all remind her of the Creator's warm embrace.
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Yes, you are right. I was not thinking that when I wrote it but now I can see it can be about Jesus.
Thank you very much, big sister ❤️