Spirited Justice
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The distraction worked for Alejandro long enough to get the scientific folder, but didn't make it all the way out of the bank. Fortunately, two of Carlos's men had been there to save him. Now Donatello is needs to investigate. Danni breaks the rules again to help him, which is becoming her on personal goal.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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The distraction worked for Alejandro long enough to get the scientific folder, but didn't make it all the way out of the bank. Fortunately, two of Carlos's men had been there to save him. Now Donatello is needs to investigate. Danni breaks the rules again to help him, which is becoming her on personal goal.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Donateli needs someone like Danni to mellow him out during the heated interrogations. He tends to terrify instead of calm the women who are already distraught. Just hope the "powers to be" over the ghosts understand.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I like the easy pace of this chapter. There is interesting behind the scenes movement of Eleanor, Angelo, Donatelli and Danni, but we're no closer to solving the mysteries. There are lots of loose ends to be tied up. So, there is still another surprise. Something was left in the vault. I look forward to the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I like the easy pace of this chapter. There is interesting behind the scenes movement of Eleanor, Angelo, Donatelli and Danni, but we're no closer to solving the mysteries. There are lots of loose ends to be tied up. So, there is still another surprise. Something was left in the vault. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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It's a slower chapter and I think there might be a few more like this before we start getting wound up to find the finish line. I am glad you are enjoying it.... Some interesting stuff in the safe deposit box...
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Spooks appearing and disappearing, this is becoming real fun Carol, I can see that this would solve a lot of crimes and problems, being able to appear and disappear, but now they are invincible with super powers beyond the ordinary, one can't be killed twice, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Spooks appearing and disappearing, this is becoming real fun Carol, I can see that this would solve a lot of crimes and problems, being able to appear and disappear, but now they are invincible with super powers beyond the ordinary, one can't be killed twice, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Typo : the one (who) Alejandro had...
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Eleanors antics are the best! I could sit and write chapter after chapter about her and her humor. She's got a heart of gold and definitely wants to bring happiness to everyone she touches. Thank you so much for your awesome review and stars.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Most welcome