Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Spirited Justice - THE END"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I'll be honest with you, Carol, I didn't feel the length of it at all. In fact, I wanted it to keep going.
Oh, so romantic, my friend!!! Fireworks going off to boot!!
But, back to the early part of the chapter. The interrogation scene was great. Henry and Bryce were putty in Garth's hands. He got what he wanted, but no so much at the German Consulate. Still, he has a lead on William. The book ends, but the story continues in Germany. I wonder if Ghosts can travel on planes??
Great job, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I'll be honest with you, Carol, I didn't feel the length of it at all. In fact, I wanted it to keep going.
Oh, so romantic, my friend!!! Fireworks going off to boot!!
But, back to the early part of the chapter. The interrogation scene was great. Henry and Bryce were putty in Garth's hands. He got what he wanted, but no so much at the German Consulate. Still, he has a lead on William. The book ends, but the story continues in Germany. I wonder if Ghosts can travel on planes??
Great job, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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My ghosts can transport anywhere... Eleanor flits betwee here and England all the time. LOL Besides, who would even dream of stopping sweet Eleanor? Thanks so much for reading and enjoying the story. And gracing me with the six stars is beyond awesome.
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
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Too true!! They will probably put her in first class, hehe.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I'm embarrassed to say I never got caught back up with this story but I wanted to pop in an say congratulations on reaching the end! Will there be more stories about the ghost detective in the future? great job, Carol!
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I'm embarrassed to say I never got caught back up with this story but I wanted to pop in an say congratulations on reaching the end! Will there be more stories about the ghost detective in the future? great job, Carol!
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. I so appreciate the thoughts. Yes, there will be another in the series but not for a few weeks. I'll write something else and then start again. Maybe you will catch that one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from phoegon
Even as a reader coming in late to the game for this story, My attention was kept throughout it all, and I didn't question who was talking. I can see why you are the number 1 novelist. Great work, and thank you for the share. I'll be sure to reflect on your work so I can improve my craft as well.
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Even as a reader coming in late to the game for this story, My attention was kept throughout it all, and I didn't question who was talking. I can see why you are the number 1 novelist. Great work, and thank you for the share. I'll be sure to reflect on your work so I can improve my craft as well.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Hello! I thank you for stopping to reach the ending of my novel. It's tough to jump in at the end but I hope you enjoyed what you read. A third in the series will begin in November and maybe you'll join me again then. I appreciate your thoughts and comments. thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol