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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Lea Tonin Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
OMG!!! Now THAT is practical!! In fact, you have taken it to a whole different level!! What's hilarious is that, if you read Jim's version, he has you dipping shrimps into the cocktail sauce on his face and eating it!! Moral: There is no five-second rule in Lea Tonin's life. All food is considered available to be eaten!! I guess that's what comes of living in the woods for six months when you're a teenager!!
Great chapter, my dear - full of authenticity and excitement and PLUCK (of course), bawdy humor and just plain entertainment. Thank you times a million zillion for contributing your talents to the adventure. xoxox
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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OMG!!! Now THAT is practical!! In fact, you have taken it to a whole different level!! What's hilarious is that, if you read Jim's version, he has you dipping shrimps into the cocktail sauce on his face and eating it!! Moral: There is no five-second rule in Lea Tonin's life. All food is considered available to be eaten!! I guess that's what comes of living in the woods for six months when you're a teenager!!
Great chapter, my dear - full of authenticity and excitement and PLUCK (of course), bawdy humor and just plain entertainment. Thank you times a million zillion for contributing your talents to the adventure. xoxox
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you.I'm really pleased that you like it! And thank you for your great comment and for your great waiting too! All the best my friend thanks again!
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Right back atcha, Cute Girl. xoxox
Comment from Michele Harber
I was so hoping your reaction to being hit by that piece of cake would be to sit there and eat it. I'd have done exactly the same. When life hands you lemons, make lemonade. When life hands you chocolate cake, have dessert.
I found it very interesting the way you wove reality and fiction into your story. I read Rachelle's second interview with you, so I understood the significance of those cars. My wish for you is that, one day, your fiction can just be fiction, not tinted by the pain and horror you've had to face. I do admire that both the real you, and the version of you that you created for this story, had/have the courage to internalize and deal with everything that's gone on, and still lead what seems to be, finally, a normal, happy life.
Congratulations on the publication of your book, and the success it's already seeing!
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I was so hoping your reaction to being hit by that piece of cake would be to sit there and eat it. I'd have done exactly the same. When life hands you lemons, make lemonade. When life hands you chocolate cake, have dessert.
I found it very interesting the way you wove reality and fiction into your story. I read Rachelle's second interview with you, so I understood the significance of those cars. My wish for you is that, one day, your fiction can just be fiction, not tinted by the pain and horror you've had to face. I do admire that both the real you, and the version of you that you created for this story, had/have the courage to internalize and deal with everything that's gone on, and still lead what seems to be, finally, a normal, happy life.
Congratulations on the publication of your book, and the success it's already seeing!
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you, michelle, thank you very much for your fine rating and your great comment.Thanks for your congratulations too! Writing for me, it's cathartic. Such a heavy load I carried for so many years when I write it out. I get to give pieces of it out to the world. Everyone takes a tiny one and then very soon.The weight on my shoulders begins to lift. Thanks again.Glad to see you and your words have a great day!
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You're very welcome. And OMG, Lea, you have the most amazing attitude I have ever seen!
I was lucky enough to grow up in a good home with loving parents, and one of the most important lessons they taught me was to talk out my problems, for exactly the reason you write yours out: problems are easier to bear when you're sharing the burden.
You have a great day as well. You deserve it!
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