No schism in the body
A poem12 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
The normal 3 S reply for a Roy Owen poem. Simple, Superb & Satisfying. Just one minor question, fourth line, verse two, should that read: Man ON Earth and not Man ns Earth. Looks to me like a typist's error. You'll have to employ a better typist. Or was it your error, they typist on your knee clouded your vision.
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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The normal 3 S reply for a Roy Owen poem. Simple, Superb & Satisfying. Just one minor question, fourth line, verse two, should that read: Man ON Earth and not Man ns Earth. Looks to me like a typist's error. You'll have to employ a better typist. Or was it your error, they typist on your knee clouded your vision.
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks Bob, for these excellent comments and review, blessings
Comment from DonandVicki
Because we cannot see God, we, or at least some of God's creatures refuse to believe in him. Some trust in their own wisdom and will regret ever being created. Well composed.
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Because we cannot see God, we, or at least some of God's creatures refuse to believe in him. Some trust in their own wisdom and will regret ever being created. Well composed.
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks D&V for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy