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Comment from Rick Gardner
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Very giving, hope, forgiveness, a sincere deep feeling of a loss, the need to internalize your loss. A need to express your loss to others. Bring their needs home, give them their own place in your personal world.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much, my friend 😊

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Rick Gardner on 19-Nov-2024
    Hugs and feelings of sorrow.
Comment from lyenochka
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Your poem means so much to me! And especially your care and prayers! My youngest daughter has been in and out of the ER, too. So much with all the holiday prep coming up. But God has this! And like you said, we just keep looking up to the Light!

By the way the verse in your notes is 3 John 2. The third letter of John is just one chapter and verse 2 is one of my favorites!

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 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    Oh, thank you, I'll fix that. John is my favorite apostle.

    Thank you very much, I'm happy it resonates with you.

    I'm sorry about your daughter at the ER... boy, when it rains it pours.

    Christmas can be hard when your loved ones are sich but I know your solid strong faith will carry you. I will pray.

    Love,

    Marival ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
reply by lyenochka on 19-Nov-2024
    Thank you for your prayers!! 💖💖
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Gypsy,

This is a beautiful poem. The words are so powerful. All who have faith are never in the dark. The picture compliments you poem beautifully.

Great job


Cecilia

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 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much, 😊

    Gypsy
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 19-Nov-2024
    Gypsy,

    You're welcome

    Cecilia