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A vlllanelle14 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Telling the truth is easy. You have no need to remember the lies and stories. It is also hard, it can hurt folks.
I had an uncle with no filter. My aunt asked him if she looked fat in her dress. He said not near as much as you did in the other one sweetie. Good writing. Happy turkey day. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Telling the truth is easy. You have no need to remember the lies and stories. It is also hard, it can hurt folks.
I had an uncle with no filter. My aunt asked him if she looked fat in her dress. He said not near as much as you did in the other one sweetie. Good writing. Happy turkey day. Karen
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Thanks Karen. for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Truth can be very hard to swallow. Hearing the truth will leave you hurt sometimes, but hearing lies is a different kind of hurt. It makes you wonder how many others are lying to you. Beautifully written. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Truth can be very hard to swallow. Hearing the truth will leave you hurt sometimes, but hearing lies is a different kind of hurt. It makes you wonder how many others are lying to you. Beautifully written. Gretchen
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Thanks Gretchen, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
Thanks for the 'road map' for the Villanelle. Yes, getting the repeated lines to have meaning is difficult, but you've done a nice job with that. Your rhymes are good also, and your rhythm is steady throughout. 'Integrity will mark (truth's) chase.' (Truth is a possessive here.) Nicely done. Blessings. Carol
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Thanks for the 'road map' for the Villanelle. Yes, getting the repeated lines to have meaning is difficult, but you've done a nice job with that. Your rhymes are good also, and your rhythm is steady throughout. 'Integrity will mark (truth's) chase.' (Truth is a possessive here.) Nicely done. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Thanks Carol, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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My pleasure. Blessings. Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Roy I'm giving you 5 stars because i could read the poem if i moused over the field but you have white on white and the words can't be seen otherwise. please check that.
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Roy I'm giving you 5 stars because i could read the poem if i moused over the field but you have white on white and the words can't be seen otherwise. please check that.
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Thanks Marilyn, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy