Time to Move Over
Sad but True19 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is so true.
I have a drawer, in it are photo albums from my dad, he passed over 20 years ago.
Now and then I might pull it out and look through it.
But, I always know it is there. it holds memories, but the ones in my heart and head are brighter and less tarnished with age.
Tim
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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This is so true.
I have a drawer, in it are photo albums from my dad, he passed over 20 years ago.
Now and then I might pull it out and look through it.
But, I always know it is there. it holds memories, but the ones in my heart and head are brighter and less tarnished with age.
Tim
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Yes Tim, so true. Thank you.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are so true, descriptive and creative. I pondered on
these words and agree with this author. The last line says it all to me!
Remember the memories of my own family will go on - thank you
for these beautiful words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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The author's words are so true, descriptive and creative. I pondered on
these words and agree with this author. The last line says it all to me!
Remember the memories of my own family will go on - thank you
for these beautiful words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words. Great Poem!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from Charlotte Morse
...or sold off to some antique dealer somewhere!
In my younger days I was an antique dealer in France and it would always break my heart to see the mementos, old photos and cherished postcards etc. of grandparents, aunts and uncles just left behind without a qualm, for me to clear with the rest of the house.
So I understand and empathize with your poem more than you can imagine!
Beautifully written and yes, so sad. Thanks for sharing.
Charlotte
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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...or sold off to some antique dealer somewhere!
In my younger days I was an antique dealer in France and it would always break my heart to see the mementos, old photos and cherished postcards etc. of grandparents, aunts and uncles just left behind without a qualm, for me to clear with the rest of the house.
So I understand and empathize with your poem more than you can imagine!
Beautifully written and yes, so sad. Thanks for sharing.
Charlotte
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you Charlotte.
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What you have written stands true and yet the collection you speak of will pass through until the people in the frame will bring no recollection, as for eternity it is a very long time without beginning and without end.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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What you have written stands true and yet the collection you speak of will pass through until the people in the frame will bring no recollection, as for eternity it is a very long time without beginning and without end.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review Tom, greatly appreciated.
Comment from Peter Jarvis
What a beautiful and poignant reflection on memory and love! The imagery of the photo frame and the passage of time evokes a sense of nostalgia and the inevitability of change. It captures how, despite the fading of physical reminders, the love and bonds within a family remain timeless. This piece resonates deeply with the idea that while objects may be forgotten, the emotions and connections we forge endure in our hearts.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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What a beautiful and poignant reflection on memory and love! The imagery of the photo frame and the passage of time evokes a sense of nostalgia and the inevitability of change. It captures how, despite the fading of physical reminders, the love and bonds within a family remain timeless. This piece resonates deeply with the idea that while objects may be forgotten, the emotions and connections we forge endure in our hearts.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you Peter.
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Take care
Comment from Trina Layne
Thanks for sharing Beejay.There is a very ripe honesty in this piece. That's life. It's the intangible things that come to make the most difference when all is said and done. Congratulations on your work!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thanks for sharing Beejay.There is a very ripe honesty in this piece. That's life. It's the intangible things that come to make the most difference when all is said and done. Congratulations on your work!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind comments, Trina
Comment from zanya
How true it is that 'our photo in that fancy frame/ Will be taken down'- while 'making room for a new generation.' and only the love that was created in our family will survive
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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How true it is that 'our photo in that fancy frame/ Will be taken down'- while 'making room for a new generation.' and only the love that was created in our family will survive
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you Zanya for your review .
Comment from Bryce 1
The last line is really nice, that cheers me up. There will come a day when we are all forgotten, but the silence will beg for our return, it will miss our laughter and fun.
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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The last line is really nice, that cheers me up. There will come a day when we are all forgotten, but the silence will beg for our return, it will miss our laughter and fun.
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you Bryce for your comments.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, the part of us that will be left behind and will endure, is not the part that people will see, it will be our 'ghost' the enduring part that we've some into our environment, our children, and descendants, and it be valued, but we will be forgotten, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Oh yes, the part of us that will be left behind and will endure, is not the part that people will see, it will be our 'ghost' the enduring part that we've some into our environment, our children, and descendants, and it be valued, but we will be forgotten, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you Roy
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