Because of Mary
It would be a teenage peasant girl that God would choose.11 total reviews
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem, "Because of Mary," is a profound and stirring piece that captures the revolutionary impact of Mary's story on society and individual lives. The way you juxtapose historical and contemporary imagery to convey the universal relevance of her experience is powerful and thought-provoking. Your use of repetition with the phrase "Because of Mary" underscores the transformative nature of her role in the Christmas story.
Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Your poem, "Because of Mary," is a profound and stirring piece that captures the revolutionary impact of Mary's story on society and individual lives. The way you juxtapose historical and contemporary imagery to convey the universal relevance of her experience is powerful and thought-provoking. Your use of repetition with the phrase "Because of Mary" underscores the transformative nature of her role in the Christmas story.
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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I'm still editing it. When you have a moment, look at it again. And thank you for your review.
