Lump of clay in his hands
the cherita poem13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Creating something beautiful from a lump of clay is like giving life with our own hands, and I enjoyed your subtle words here explaining the process of creating this lovely sculpture, love Dolly x x x
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Creating something beautiful from a lump of clay is like giving life with our own hands, and I enjoyed your subtle words here explaining the process of creating this lovely sculpture, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I suspect one should be admired for making much from so little like haikus and whatever other form is used, but for the most part I rarely take a meaning from what is written. THis one is an exception. Well done.
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I suspect one should be admired for making much from so little like haikus and whatever other form is used, but for the most part I rarely take a meaning from what is written. THis one is an exception. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Sanku,
This is a great poem. It tells the story of a potter molding a piece of art. I like the line, "The hands gave it shape" The poem is well organized and flows quite nicely.
Well done
Cecilia
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Sanku,
This is a great poem. It tells the story of a potter molding a piece of art. I like the line, "The hands gave it shape" The poem is well organized and flows quite nicely.
Well done
Cecilia
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024