Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Cheating Eyes"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love that Mitch maintains his professionalism as a Police Officer here and does not succumb to Miranda's persuasion. You described a realistic situation here. I do think Miranda's instincts are correct though. When Waylon wakes up, all will be revealed.
You have some Gremlins at the beginning of your story Gretchen.
Just one edit here:
(The) guy who said enough trash to people . . . .
Another fine chapter in your story Gretchen, always enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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I love that Mitch maintains his professionalism as a Police Officer here and does not succumb to Miranda's persuasion. You described a realistic situation here. I do think Miranda's instincts are correct though. When Waylon wakes up, all will be revealed.
You have some Gremlins at the beginning of your story Gretchen.
Just one edit here:
(The) guy who said enough trash to people . . . .
Another fine chapter in your story Gretchen, always enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Apparently, Fanstory does not like french words. Lol. Thank you for this wonderful review. Gretchen
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Nope, you are right there Gretchen x
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Mitch just can't keep himself from allowing Miranda to see the photos of the wreckage. She has seen a lot that leaves more questions than answers. She just doesn't believe Dougie would kill the lecherous teacher, so she sets up in his hospital room waiting for him to regain consciousness.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Mitch just can't keep himself from allowing Miranda to see the photos of the wreckage. She has seen a lot that leaves more questions than answers. She just doesn't believe Dougie would kill the lecherous teacher, so she sets up in his hospital room waiting for him to regain consciousness.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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You are up to speed, Carol. She seems to think that when Dougie awakens, he will tell her everything she needs to know. But will Dougie come out of it? Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
While it certainly looks bad for Dougie, it is very possible he has been the victim of a set-up. Miranda knows him well enough to know what he would and wouldn't do. It's good that Mitch trusts her well enough to disappear for a few minutes - he respects her thoughts and insights. A fine chapter.
Wendy
Gremlins in the word "eclairs" need editing out.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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While it certainly looks bad for Dougie, it is very possible he has been the victim of a set-up. Miranda knows him well enough to know what he would and wouldn't do. It's good that Mitch trusts her well enough to disappear for a few minutes - he respects her thoughts and insights. A fine chapter.
Wendy
Gremlins in the word "eclairs" need editing out.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Gremlins indeed. They do not like french punctuations here on Fanstory. I think Mitch knew she was gonna pester him until he gave in. Lol. Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen
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Lol. Yes, I'm sure he did. He knows her very well!
Comment from royowen
There's one thing I know about Miranda is she's as smart as her creator, and a has a natural way of rationalising things without her emotions interfering with the logical of deductive thought, I've gotten to know both of you over the years, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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There's one thing I know about Miranda is she's as smart as her creator, and a has a natural way of rationalising things without her emotions interfering with the logical of deductive thought, I've gotten to know both of you over the years, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Roy. I will take your compliment and pass it along to Miranda. I appreciate your kind review. Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from lancellot
Well, love does make a man do things he shouldn't. Also, the plot demands it. Good chapter, but does Waylon really need Dougie? And Dougie is human, but he is far from a good man. At least from the stories when been shown. Him helping a stranger in need???
I have a huge bag of donuts, {eclairs,} bear claws and a jug of coffee for them.
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Well, love does make a man do things he shouldn't. Also, the plot demands it. Good chapter, but does Waylon really need Dougie? And Dougie is human, but he is far from a good man. At least from the stories when been shown. Him helping a stranger in need???
I have a huge bag of donuts, {eclairs,} bear claws and a jug of coffee for them.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Lancellot. The computer gremlins destroyed my fine french pastry. Lol. I appreciate this encouraging review. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Even if you are sick to death of me always telling you what a great author you are - and it does NOT matter what book, either; you're great at them all - I will not stop.
This seems like such a cut-and-dried chapter, and yet it's full of so much really good "stuff," not the least of which is Mitch and Miranda's relationship. I love how totally they "get" each other and appreciate their level of trust and mutual respect. I loved that scene with the two of them. Perfect and brilliant. GW Hargis at her absolute best.
I love how you're getting our wheels turning as you explain the scene of the accident through Miranda's eyes. And I love how she is THE most fair and forgiving and understanding person around. She knows Dougie for who he is, she remembers what he did to her (and Waylon), yet she is true to her instincts and giving him the benefit of the doubt. She is definitely WAY more woman that I would ever be, and for that reason, I respect and admire and adore her. She's just got that irresistible 'something' that everyone likes.
A couple teeny spags, Miss Talent:
1.) There are gremlins before the word 'eclair.'
2.) Because I know each and every (space) one of these wonderful law enforcement officers
3.) Jack(no space)ass [it's in here twice this way.]
Another super duper chapter...from the author who knows no other way to write!!
xoxoxo
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Even if you are sick to death of me always telling you what a great author you are - and it does NOT matter what book, either; you're great at them all - I will not stop.
This seems like such a cut-and-dried chapter, and yet it's full of so much really good "stuff," not the least of which is Mitch and Miranda's relationship. I love how totally they "get" each other and appreciate their level of trust and mutual respect. I loved that scene with the two of them. Perfect and brilliant. GW Hargis at her absolute best.
I love how you're getting our wheels turning as you explain the scene of the accident through Miranda's eyes. And I love how she is THE most fair and forgiving and understanding person around. She knows Dougie for who he is, she remembers what he did to her (and Waylon), yet she is true to her instincts and giving him the benefit of the doubt. She is definitely WAY more woman that I would ever be, and for that reason, I respect and admire and adore her. She's just got that irresistible 'something' that everyone likes.
A couple teeny spags, Miss Talent:
1.) There are gremlins before the word 'eclair.'
2.) Because I know each and every (space) one of these wonderful law enforcement officers
3.) Jack(no space)ass [it's in here twice this way.]
Another super duper chapter...from the author who knows no other way to write!!
xoxoxo
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Awe, thank you so much, Rachelle. I'm glad you are still in the running with Miranda. I have fun with the scenes between Mitch and Miranda. He's so practical and she comes out guns ablazing. Appreciate your compliments too. Gretchen
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They are yin and yang, so it works. He respects her judgments and assessments, though, even though she is impetuous. That's why I'm crazy about him.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Dougie is lucky to have Miranda on his side, because no one else is. Apart from Waylon. That was sweet of Mitch, he loves Miranda, and it must have been hard to find her fighting for Dougie. But he also knows Miranda loves him, and knows she'd never go back to her Waylon's dad. As much as he wants her to. Great chapter, Gretchen, now to wait for the next one. :)) Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Dougie is lucky to have Miranda on his side, because no one else is. Apart from Waylon. That was sweet of Mitch, he loves Miranda, and it must have been hard to find her fighting for Dougie. But he also knows Miranda loves him, and knows she'd never go back to her Waylon's dad. As much as he wants her to. Great chapter, Gretchen, now to wait for the next one. :)) Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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thank you so much, Sandra. I really appreciate this wonderful review and the shiny extra star. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad Mitch shared information with Miranda. I am glad she's thinking things through. I really like this story.
It's unethical and I really don't want you butting into our investigation. (comma after 'unethical' you switched subjects)
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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I'm glad Mitch shared information with Miranda. I am glad she's thinking things through. I really like this story.
It's unethical and I really don't want you butting into our investigation. (comma after 'unethical' you switched subjects)
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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thank you so much for the wonderful review and the edits. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Progress.
...and the woman was this man's husband. - this man's 'wife'?
Except for the husband/wife confusion, it's error-free as near as I can tell.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Progress.
...and the woman was this man's husband. - this man's 'wife'?
Except for the husband/wife confusion, it's error-free as near as I can tell.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, wayne for this nice review and the edits. Much appreciated. Gretchen
