Loss of Oracle
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Comment from royowen
Our feelings way or another can influence our feelings, but I don't know why, I'm learning to trust my trust rather than my feelings, after God told me that they are a gift not an obstacle to trip over. Beautifully written, blessings Roh
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Our feelings way or another can influence our feelings, but I don't know why, I'm learning to trust my trust rather than my feelings, after God told me that they are a gift not an obstacle to trip over. Beautifully written, blessings Roh
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Roy, thanks for your thoughtful response. teafor2
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Most welcome
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:-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When someone who matters in our life, suddenly leaves, it does leave us with anxious feelings, especially when it is totally unexpected, this could be due to death or just someone deciding to leave, the result is the same, a poem full of turmoil and chaos, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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When someone who matters in our life, suddenly leaves, it does leave us with anxious feelings, especially when it is totally unexpected, this could be due to death or just someone deciding to leave, the result is the same, a poem full of turmoil and chaos, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Thank for your thoughtful review, Dolly. teafor2
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem. The line "Your going made us exclaim, Wow!" hit me hard - it shares disbelief in such a natural way. I love how you wrote this including the different colors.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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I really enjoyed your poem. The line "Your going made us exclaim, Wow!" hit me hard - it shares disbelief in such a natural way. I love how you wrote this including the different colors.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Thanks Michael, for your shared sentiments and personal remarks.
teafor2
Comment from Noreen Bernardo
What a deeply thoughtful written poem. It actually describes life in many forms. One moment, one decision, etc, changes the trajectory of our being leaving us sometimes, as you have described, in angst.
Well done. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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What a deeply thoughtful written poem. It actually describes life in many forms. One moment, one decision, etc, changes the trajectory of our being leaving us sometimes, as you have described, in angst.
Well done. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Noreen, thanks for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks.
Your response is encouraging and appreciated. teafor2
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I enjoyed this. Is it a special format? I like the repetitive lines. You did another one in this format if I remember correctly. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed this. Is it a special format? I like the repetitive lines. You did another one in this format if I remember correctly. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Marilyn, thanks for your thoughtful comments, personal remarks and keen memory...I did a rondelet before, it's one of my favorite forms.
Seven lines: French form of two rhymes...Lines 1, 3, and 7 are four syllables and rhyme...Lines 2, 4, 5 and 6 are eight syllables... Lines 1, 3, 4 and 7 rhyme.
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yikes. i don't think so. not yet lol
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I don't believe you, queen of the limerick and prince of other formal forms!
