Precious Gems: An Anthology
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "My Dear Edwine"A Rhyming Collection of Treasured Works
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Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning poet friend and what an interesting poem and romantic as well!
I enjoyed this so very much. I see you have been nominated for the poem of the month, congradulations! Loyd
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009
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Good morning poet friend and what an interesting poem and romantic as well!
I enjoyed this so very much. I see you have been nominated for the poem of the month, congradulations! Loyd
Comment Written 17-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009
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Thank you very much indeed Loyd!! xoxoxoxoxxoxo
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My pleasure, Loyd
Comment from Nightwind1
Wuthering Heights was a favorite book of mine when I was young and in school. I enjoyed your poem based from it. It was classic to Bronte. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009
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Wuthering Heights was a favorite book of mine when I was young and in school. I enjoyed your poem based from it. It was classic to Bronte. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009
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Thank you very much indeed Nightwind1! xoxoxoxxoxoxo
Comment from Janelle
Well my dear, you have just proven that you should have much pride and no prejudice at all about writing a romantic, tear jerking, soulful poem. You have definitely wuthered the storm and scaled the heights in this period piece which is full of devoted love and heart wrenching loss. I am so happy for you to have stretched your wings and absolutely flown free and easy with this lovely piece. A six it deserves and a six it gets, for the rythmn, the scene you've painted and the feelings it described so vividly. Bravo my girl! Regards, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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Well my dear, you have just proven that you should have much pride and no prejudice at all about writing a romantic, tear jerking, soulful poem. You have definitely wuthered the storm and scaled the heights in this period piece which is full of devoted love and heart wrenching loss. I am so happy for you to have stretched your wings and absolutely flown free and easy with this lovely piece. A six it deserves and a six it gets, for the rythmn, the scene you've painted and the feelings it described so vividly. Bravo my girl! Regards, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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Love that: "wuthered the storm" BEWDIFUL!! Gee, yer really making a great day even greater my friend with all your encouragement and lovely words. It's always great too when one of my countrymen likes what I've done. I'll be popping in as soon as I'm able - busy week ahead - to your portfolio m'dear to repay the favour! xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Amicus
This is a well crafted and effective poem. Imagery is sharp and effective, rhythm and rhyme work throughout, and
the content is interesting. I wouldn't change a word.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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This is a well crafted and effective poem. Imagery is sharp and effective, rhythm and rhyme work throughout, and
the content is interesting. I wouldn't change a word.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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Thankyou very much Amicus. Your kind words are high praise indeed and very encouraging. Nice to meet you! xoxoxoxo
Comment from adewpearl
come back to me - I search for you o'er land and sea - you have found such a longing voice here - you truly create a brooding tone, much in the spirit of Wuthering Heights
threatening, blackening nightscape looms - the mood is sure getting to me!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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come back to me - I search for you o'er land and sea - you have found such a longing voice here - you truly create a brooding tone, much in the spirit of Wuthering Heights
threatening, blackening nightscape looms - the mood is sure getting to me!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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So long as the mood doesn't bring you down! So glad you enjoyed this adew; as always I appreciate your visits and comments xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Roisin
A beautiful, beautiful poem, full of love and sadness. Your rhyme and rhythm is wonderful and your imagery is vivid and descriptive. I really enjoyed.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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A beautiful, beautiful poem, full of love and sadness. Your rhyme and rhythm is wonderful and your imagery is vivid and descriptive. I really enjoyed.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 14-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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Thankyou Roison for such warm words of praise. You made my day! xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from PoetinTraining
beautiful! moorish scenario of Wuthering Heights-like! This is absolutely flawless!! THE best poem I've come across. Awesome. PiT
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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beautiful! moorish scenario of Wuthering Heights-like! This is absolutely flawless!! THE best poem I've come across. Awesome. PiT
Comment Written 14-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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As said in pm, thank you so very much PiT xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from mslyla216
'Tis lovely, this poem is. Lovely words, lovely rhyme. OI can see the likening to Wuthering Heights as your wording follows a period piece. Even though the poem is a sad one, its beauty still shines through the darkness. Good job. mslyla
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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'Tis lovely, this poem is. Lovely words, lovely rhyme. OI can see the likening to Wuthering Heights as your wording follows a period piece. Even though the poem is a sad one, its beauty still shines through the darkness. Good job. mslyla
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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Why thankyou mslyla for your lovely words. They shine their own light in the darkest of night xoxoxoxoxox
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello alpacalady
I'm so glad you got inspired by the classical story of
Wuthering Heights. Very strong imagery with rhyme,
Your meter is excellent and,indeed, a pleasure to read your work
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Hello alpacalady
I'm so glad you got inspired by the classical story of
Wuthering Heights. Very strong imagery with rhyme,
Your meter is excellent and,indeed, a pleasure to read your work
Gert
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Oh, thank you so much Gert! Good to see you my friend; how have you been! xoxoxoxoxo
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alpacalady You are so welcome
Gert
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Your poem is beautiful. You've stretched your poetic wings to the fullest. It was my pleasure to read this. I found no errors here. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Your poem is beautiful. You've stretched your poetic wings to the fullest. It was my pleasure to read this. I found no errors here. Good job.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Thank you very much El Gato. The pleasure is surely all mine xoxoxoxoxoxxo