Michael
Four short years....42 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
This poem is a beautiful tribute to Michael. You have described your memories of him in a beautiful way. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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This poem is a beautiful tribute to Michael. You have described your memories of him in a beautiful way. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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Eliz
I was crying too much when I wrote it so I should have done a better job, but my emotions are definitely in the words. CArol
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You di a great job and I could tell you were speaking from the heart.
Comment from Blue Danube
Begin Again:
You pour your heart, longing and love for Michael in this poem.
"Michael" takes us right to the sweetness and how special your little boy was during his short life and how beloved he remains.
Thanks for sharing with us both this very poignant chapter and various dear memories of your wonderful child.
Blue
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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Begin Again:
You pour your heart, longing and love for Michael in this poem.
"Michael" takes us right to the sweetness and how special your little boy was during his short life and how beloved he remains.
Thanks for sharing with us both this very poignant chapter and various dear memories of your wonderful child.
Blue
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Bue DAnube
I was blessed by him and every moment we shared. Thank you. CArol
Comment from AlvinTEthington
The loss of a child before a parent is probably one of the hardest elements of life to bear. When I did counseling, I would much rather deal with the murder of a sibling than that situation; it is so painful. The key to the poem is in the poignant last line. It's a beautiful poem with great descriptive powers.
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The loss of a child before a parent is probably one of the hardest elements of life to bear. When I did counseling, I would much rather deal with the murder of a sibling than that situation; it is so painful. The key to the poem is in the poignant last line. It's a beautiful poem with great descriptive powers.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Alvin
My son smiles down on you and so do I. Thank you for the wonderful words. Smiles, CArol
Comment from Sarabran
Such a touching poem remembering your Michael. He sounds like such a amazing little boy, and i know you much really miss him. Your poem was such a wonderful tribute to a dear little boy. Sarabran :)
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Such a touching poem remembering your Michael. He sounds like such a amazing little boy, and i know you much really miss him. Your poem was such a wonderful tribute to a dear little boy. Sarabran :)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Sara
Thanks for alll your kind thoughts. I miss him everyday, but today I think he brought me another gift with so many warm and loving responses. Smiles, CArol
Comment from hotstuff
I was scrolling down the list of stories and saw your contest entry about Michael. I had to read it because I knew it would be another fitting tribute to your beautiful boy. It is. You will see him again as this is God's promise to us.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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I was scrolling down the list of stories and saw your contest entry about Michael. I had to read it because I knew it would be another fitting tribute to your beautiful boy. It is. You will see him again as this is God's promise to us.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Hotstuff
I was crying to hard when I attempted to write that in the middle of the night, but it seemed the right thing to do. Thanks so much. CArol
Comment from Summer Falls
This made my heart sigh. How sad and beautiful at the same time. You know what? I could just see little Michael sending those cheerio's down the steps. It made me smile.
Excellent poem. I wish you the best.
Summer
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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This made my heart sigh. How sad and beautiful at the same time. You know what? I could just see little Michael sending those cheerio's down the steps. It made me smile.
Excellent poem. I wish you the best.
Summer
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Summer
I could have made that list go on and on but I was crying too much. He left me with more memories than most would in a lifetime and all beautiful ones. Thank you. Smiles, CArol
Comment from Nicnac
Oh my, Carol!
My heart is breaking.
I don't ever want to know that kind of pain.
How very sad.
Your poem is so lovely. The wonderful memories of the little things show that all things are big and beautiful.
Thank you for writing this personal and moving piece, and for sharing Michael with me.
Blessings and hugs.
Nic
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Oh my, Carol!
My heart is breaking.
I don't ever want to know that kind of pain.
How very sad.
Your poem is so lovely. The wonderful memories of the little things show that all things are big and beautiful.
Thank you for writing this personal and moving piece, and for sharing Michael with me.
Blessings and hugs.
Nic
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Nic
Have you read A Mothers Gift...It's a love poem I wrote today with his picture. I was blessed for four short years but his smile lives with me every day. Thanks CArol
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I'm going to take a look now - Nic
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Begin again
your poem is both heart breaking and what a delight to read about you precious boy being with you for only four years.
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Hello Begin again
your poem is both heart breaking and what a delight to read about you precious boy being with you for only four years.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Gert
Have you seen his picture? I posted A Mothers Gift today..He's smiling like always. Thanks so much for the review. CArol
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Hi Carol,
no I haven't seen his picture can you give me the link so I can read your work and see the picture.
smiles
Gert
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Go to the home page of fanstory and it's listed under the top six poems...A Mother's Gift
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Back again Carol never mind sending me the link
I found your love poem and have send you are review.
Gert.
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Found it Carol
Gert
Comment from Jessica Bell
This is beautiful beyond the words that any review could deliver. You've captured so many important moments of a little boy who lived so much in just his four short years. I am sorry for your loss, but glad that you're able to share these moving memories with us!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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This is beautiful beyond the words that any review could deliver. You've captured so many important moments of a little boy who lived so much in just his four short years. I am sorry for your loss, but glad that you're able to share these moving memories with us!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Jessica
Thank you so much for your review and kind words. Michael was very special to me and will always hold a special place in my heart. Thank you. Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am positive those four years are itched on your heart forever. You wrote a beautiful tribute to Michael. I can tell how he touched your heart and I am positive he felt loved. Good luck with the contes.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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I am positive those four years are itched on your heart forever. You wrote a beautiful tribute to Michael. I can tell how he touched your heart and I am positive he felt loved. Good luck with the contes.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Barbara
thank you so much for the kind and thoughtful words. I appreciate it very much. Carol