Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Beth, Good glory, a condom raincoat for Barbie - hey, with Barbie's looks, she could use a bit of protection! LOL What a fun story that shows us just how cute, innocent, resourceful, fashion-conscious and deceptive our littles can be! LOL Brooke

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009

Thank you Brooke, This one is one my daughter pulled. She actually wanted to make a Barbie raincoat from it. That is not quite as bad as one of my friend's granddaughters taking one to school for show and tell. I'm not sure what she told. LOL.
Beth

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009

Brooke, Just out of curiosity, How did you know this was written by me? I thought the entries for this contest were supposed to be blind.

reply by adewpearl on 26-Dec-2009

most of the things I review by reciprocating reviews - you review me, I reply to you, and then I click on your portfolio to find something of yours to review in return :-)
There are some contests where I know more than half the entrants because of this.

Comment from indelibleink

Good

Cute little story. Perhaps Mommy and Daddy will buy "Raincoat Barbie" in the near future. Either that or start locking the nightstand! Only criticism was that it's happened many times in real-life; If it were me, I'd try to come up with something that might surprise the reader a bit more. Nice job none-the-less.

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009

I'm sure this may have happened many times in real life. Fortunately, It has only happened once in my real life. Only one of my daughters thought it would make a nice raincoat. I won't tell you what I thought when I discovered a used one.
Thanks for the review.
Cheers

Comment from Heidixoxo

Excellent

LOL....this is just to great!! Leave it to a child right? I found this well written and creative as well. Good luck to you....

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009

Thanks for the reivew. I'm glad you like it.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Hello

The innocence of a child is sometimes the horror of the adult...A very well written and cute story...It should do well in the contest.

Carol

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from patmedium

Excellent

I'm laughing so much, it's hard to write... or even think!
What a wonderful little story! I wish you the best of luck with it! Pat.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009

Thank you for your review. I glad it made you laugh.

Comment from JBCaine

Excellent

Barbie only needs that raincoat if she's dating Ken.
Very nicely done for the theme of the contest. Pretty good point-of-view story. I could see a kid thinking exactly that way.
No grammar issues that I noticed. Good luck with the contest.
JBCaine

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009

Thanks for the review and funny comments. I had a daughter who thought exactly that way. Happy New Year

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

This was great... funny, humorous and made me snicker as soon as I read.. "here are some little gold packages" and could picture the innocence of a little girl(child) in wonderment... good luck

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009

Thanks, I glad you got a chuckle from it.