Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "old cowboys"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
Hi and welcome to Fanstory!
great presentation, choice of color & font too;
Well done throughout; I'd give it a 6 but it's already as high as it can earn :) good job!
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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Hi and welcome to Fanstory!
great presentation, choice of color & font too;
Well done throughout; I'd give it a 6 but it's already as high as it can earn :) good job!
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you Pat for reading and the comments
Comment from Gideon Roth
Great job on this Deepwater. For anyone who grew up on the farm and even remotely has been connected to the ranching life or farming should appreciate this poem. Best of success with your continued writing...Gideon
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Great job on this Deepwater. For anyone who grew up on the farm and even remotely has been connected to the ranching life or farming should appreciate this poem. Best of success with your continued writing...Gideon
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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Thank you Gideon for reading and the comments GW
Comment from TexAnn
I love this poem. It is wonderfully written and also makes me reflect. We always seem start to start out with the best of intentions and somewhere along the way lose what makes us. When we realize that, sometimes a real pity.
Thank you for this read! TexAnn
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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I love this poem. It is wonderfully written and also makes me reflect. We always seem start to start out with the best of intentions and somewhere along the way lose what makes us. When we realize that, sometimes a real pity.
Thank you for this read! TexAnn
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thanks again texann for reading
Comment from laren
This is a great story-poem which tell us about a couple with different ways of life and all what we carry, sometimes learned before. He loose the love of that woman.
Congratulations!
Laren
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This is a great story-poem which tell us about a couple with different ways of life and all what we carry, sometimes learned before. He loose the love of that woman.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thanks again laren
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sometimes the choices are tough. We have to do what makes us happy in spirit, not with just the heart.
Excellent artwork to compliment an excellent poem.........jim
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Sometimes the choices are tough. We have to do what makes us happy in spirit, not with just the heart.
Excellent artwork to compliment an excellent poem.........jim
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you jim
Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn
I love cowboys, as they are so misunderstood, I think. Especially the mature ones, who have a few years under their belts and have seen so much. They are wise and have much to teach others, on this pathway we call life. Well done and thanks for posting.
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I love cowboys, as they are so misunderstood, I think. Especially the mature ones, who have a few years under their belts and have seen so much. They are wise and have much to teach others, on this pathway we call life. Well done and thanks for posting.
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thanks again for reading janine
Comment from patmedium
Just had a quick zip through the others to catch up. You are certainly working it out of your system, Gary, with this. Good for you. Pat.
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Just had a quick zip through the others to catch up. You are certainly working it out of your system, Gary, with this. Good for you. Pat.
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thanks again pat
Comment from enjoi
With rather simplistic language, deceptively so, you manage to come up with a really interesting poem. I dig your style of telling a story through the medium of poetry. Keep it up.
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With rather simplistic language, deceptively so, you manage to come up with a really interesting poem. I dig your style of telling a story through the medium of poetry. Keep it up.
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you enjoi for reading
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Deep Water,
Your well written poem resonated with me. I have known many old cowboys... in fact, my father was one of them.
In my experience, old cowboys are truly a part of the sod.
Tastes differ but one is what one is... some things just don't want to be changed. Congratulations on expressing your thoughts so vividly. This is fine writing.
Cheers, W ^-^
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Hi Deep Water,
Your well written poem resonated with me. I have known many old cowboys... in fact, my father was one of them.
In my experience, old cowboys are truly a part of the sod.
Tastes differ but one is what one is... some things just don't want to be changed. Congratulations on expressing your thoughts so vividly. This is fine writing.
Cheers, W ^-^
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you W for reading
Comment from SamanthaD.
This is my very first time to read and review a cowboy poem on this site but if they are anywhere near as good as this one I will continue reading them.. You may have just opened up a whole new world for me! your poem is wonderful!
hugs, Samantha
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This is my very first time to read and review a cowboy poem on this site but if they are anywhere near as good as this one I will continue reading them.. You may have just opened up a whole new world for me! your poem is wonderful!
hugs, Samantha
Comment Written 13-May-2010
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thank you samantha