Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "October Morn"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from evilynne
A sad and very insightful poem about the end of life. It is quite well written and flows beautifully from beginning to end, leaving its touching message.
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A sad and very insightful poem about the end of life. It is quite well written and flows beautifully from beginning to end, leaving its touching message.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from freepass
As always I like your poems
I liked it nothing I noticed was wrong
it rhymed told a story
and was very good
I'll give it 5 stars*****
and it already has 2 ribbons so it's great!
get the quality seal!
good luck
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As always I like your poems
I liked it nothing I noticed was wrong
it rhymed told a story
and was very good
I'll give it 5 stars*****
and it already has 2 ribbons so it's great!
get the quality seal!
good luck
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from pattipac
Your poem asked the question we all asked of ourselves, if we are fortunate to live a long life, "Did my life pass the test?" This simple, but important question reveals a man who loved life, his family, and God.
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Your poem asked the question we all asked of ourselves, if we are fortunate to live a long life, "Did my life pass the test?" This simple, but important question reveals a man who loved life, his family, and God.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from RGstar
It is good if one can come to that point in life where one can truly have those reflections.
Totally at ease with life, I hope it is the same for me.
Nicely written.
Have a good day,
Rgstar
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It is good if one can come to that point in life where one can truly have those reflections.
Totally at ease with life, I hope it is the same for me.
Nicely written.
Have a good day,
Rgstar
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from padumachitta
hi. i hope i am this clear when i face death. this is a no nonsence look at the edn of a life. i like the way this floews and reads padumachitta
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hi. i hope i am this clear when i face death. this is a no nonsence look at the edn of a life. i like the way this floews and reads padumachitta
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Louise Michelle
Good grief - it's you again. Don't you feel guilty about monopolizing Fan Story postings, only kidding. Very nice musings that we can all relate to. The older we get, the more we think back on our lives and, hopefully, do feel we have more accomplishments than regrets. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Good grief - it's you again. Don't you feel guilty about monopolizing Fan Story postings, only kidding. Very nice musings that we can all relate to. The older we get, the more we think back on our lives and, hopefully, do feel we have more accomplishments than regrets. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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was away for over two years and need to get back in the saddle
Gary
Comment from chasennov
Writings From the Heart 'October Morn.' This is as excellent a poem as you could wish to read anywhere at all. I enjoyed it wholesomely. Well done.
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Writings From the Heart 'October Morn.' This is as excellent a poem as you could wish to read anywhere at all. I enjoyed it wholesomely. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Bobby Jo
I love this. The rhyming was really good. It tells the story in a poem. As I lay here at rest, did my life pass the test, set by my father before? I love this verse.
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I love this. The rhyming was really good. It tells the story in a poem. As I lay here at rest, did my life pass the test, set by my father before? I love this verse.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Sueswrite
This was written so well. I just love the feeling within me after reading the passionate description of this persons recollection of his life. Your writing, once again, is terrific! I enjoyed this very much!
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This was written so well. I just love the feeling within me after reading the passionate description of this persons recollection of his life. Your writing, once again, is terrific! I enjoyed this very much!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from DALLAS01
This is a rather matter of fact look at end of life, kind of like and over view, and to me, indicates one lived well without a lot of regret or fear of what is on the other side.
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This is a rather matter of fact look at end of life, kind of like and over view, and to me, indicates one lived well without a lot of regret or fear of what is on the other side.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014