Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Part three Chapter four"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from miss joyce
Your author notes are impressive to say the least...
Your detailed story of abuse and a runaway parent
with her child is wonderfully penned. I am thrilled to
finally get to read a few stories by you and other outstanding writers. Take care, dear lady!
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Your author notes are impressive to say the least...
Your detailed story of abuse and a runaway parent
with her child is wonderfully penned. I am thrilled to
finally get to read a few stories by you and other outstanding writers. Take care, dear lady!
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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It was a pleasure!
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My pleasure!
Comment from DonandVicki
Ordinarily I don't like to read work about domestic violence but I really think that you have put this story together in a sensitive way that is readable and doesn't leave your stomach in a knot.Don
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Ordinarily I don't like to read work about domestic violence but I really think that you have put this story together in a sensitive way that is readable and doesn't leave your stomach in a knot.Don
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Readywriter52
Anna and her son have disappeared. No one seems to know where she is. Bobby is angry and Troy is mystified. I hope she is safe.
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Anna and her son have disappeared. No one seems to know where she is. Bobby is angry and Troy is mystified. I hope she is safe.
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
Your story is very riveting and very well written. It held my attention throughout and I am looking forward to reading your next installment.
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Your story is very riveting and very well written. It held my attention throughout and I am looking forward to reading your next installment.
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, hopefully she has been wisked away to a safe place and that all will eventually turn out to be ok. It's so rough to think that this could be a real story.
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Barbara, hopefully she has been wisked away to a safe place and that all will eventually turn out to be ok. It's so rough to think that this could be a real story.
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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thank you for your kind review.
Comment from glpar
This story continues to be well written and leaving me wanting more. I am happy to see the Phone numbers listed for abuse hotlines. Now hopefully some who need them will make that all important call. I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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This story continues to be well written and leaving me wanting more. I am happy to see the Phone numbers listed for abuse hotlines. Now hopefully some who need them will make that all important call. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbara, now I'm worried. Where has Anna gone with Michael. These laws make it difficult for her to escape to a safe place where her stupid husband won't find her.
Well written chapter, love. I enjoyed.
Take care. luv jada
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Hi Barbara, now I'm worried. Where has Anna gone with Michael. These laws make it difficult for her to escape to a safe place where her stupid husband won't find her.
Well written chapter, love. I enjoyed.
Take care. luv jada
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from WilliamDeen
Good addition to the story with some good intrigue. The reader is left wanting to get to the next posting. Look forward to next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Good addition to the story with some good intrigue. The reader is left wanting to get to the next posting. Look forward to next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from R. K. Alan
So now you have thrown a monkey wrench into the story... nicely done, by the way. She obviously became concerned for the baby and lit out, probably with the help of the nurse. Hopefully she has found a safe refuge. Ray aka R. K. Alan
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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So now you have thrown a monkey wrench into the story... nicely done, by the way. She obviously became concerned for the baby and lit out, probably with the help of the nurse. Hopefully she has found a safe refuge. Ray aka R. K. Alan
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and insight.
Comment from ulster3
Hello barbara...
I enjoyed this chapter tremendously. Anna 's dissappearance creates some tension. It is wonderful that Paul is taking her part. I was pleased to see the positive personal stuff in your notes. God bless you and your son. Your statistics are very impressive.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Hello barbara...
I enjoyed this chapter tremendously. Anna 's dissappearance creates some tension. It is wonderful that Paul is taking her part. I was pleased to see the positive personal stuff in your notes. God bless you and your son. Your statistics are very impressive.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.