Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Part 4, Chapter 13"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from ericawrites
Very interesting chapter... this story is
really hotting up!
I'm looking forward to the next instalment
already!
Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Very interesting chapter... this story is
really hotting up!
I'm looking forward to the next instalment
already!
Well done!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, Barbara.
I'm so glad I did not miss thjis next piece. In the past I had a few breathing calls. They are awful. In my case it was likely some kids carrying on. The loud muffler has raised my interest in who drives that car.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Hello, Barbara.
I'm so glad I did not miss thjis next piece. In the past I had a few breathing calls. They are awful. In my case it was likely some kids carrying on. The loud muffler has raised my interest in who drives that car.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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It seems to be forever difficult to manage all the things we need to on site here. I am glad I missed nothing here. Hugs, Rebecca
Comment from oozer
I do doubt this reationshipm is going to work. Troy- What's in a name? Does the very name itself sound something... Can't take with him or his forbodinf name...Suppose it does work, this match..do you think i will like it
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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I do doubt this reationshipm is going to work. Troy- What's in a name? Does the very name itself sound something... Can't take with him or his forbodinf name...Suppose it does work, this match..do you think i will like it
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from nora arjuna
Hi Barb, looks like it isn't over for Anna. And she should've taken the phone threat seriously. I found nothing much to pick at here. Just check this part:
"Ms. Rodgers, there's a gentleman." Her eyes['s] met Troy's. - need to be removed.
Hope you are well.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Hi Barb, looks like it isn't over for Anna. And she should've taken the phone threat seriously. I found nothing much to pick at here. Just check this part:
"Ms. Rodgers, there's a gentleman." Her eyes['s] met Troy's. - need to be removed.
Hope you are well.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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I am sorry it's taken so long to answer the review. I needed to wait until I had time to make the correction. Thank you for your eagle eye.
Comment from peggles
Hello Barbara
You certainly know how to keep the tension going in your story
I enjoyed how you created suspense in this
even with her husband locked up
and the divorce done she
is still having so many problems
Wonder will she ever find peace
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Hello Barbara
You certainly know how to keep the tension going in your story
I enjoyed how you created suspense in this
even with her husband locked up
and the divorce done she
is still having so many problems
Wonder will she ever find peace
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from God's Writer
I was wondering what had happened to you, But alas it was I who went astray. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your stories. They are well written and veer descriptive and passionate. I love a woman to write passionate. Thank you for the opportunity to read an review you're stories.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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I was wondering what had happened to you, But alas it was I who went astray. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your stories. They are well written and veer descriptive and passionate. I love a woman to write passionate. Thank you for the opportunity to read an review you're stories.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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Thank you for providing a vehicle for those who are locked within themselves and can't wak where fairy queens walk, or be the queen of my doublewide. LOL.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello Barbara
Well you have really put one in the minds of your readers. It is filled with intrigue, especially the ending. Now what?
I hate it when I am kept in the dark
Bear
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Hello Barbara
Well you have really put one in the minds of your readers. It is filled with intrigue, especially the ending. Now what?
I hate it when I am kept in the dark
Bear
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from amada
The phone call was really scary for me. Many years ago I used to get these kind of calls when my husband was away at sea. Awful feeling. I never knew who he was, probable one of the neighbors. We moved out!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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The phone call was really scary for me. Many years ago I used to get these kind of calls when my husband was away at sea. Awful feeling. I never knew who he was, probable one of the neighbors. We moved out!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from rheabug
To my Texas neighbor, YOu are doing an excellent job with this series. And now you leave us with a cliff hanger! Thanks for sharing, Linda
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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To my Texas neighbor, YOu are doing an excellent job with this series. And now you leave us with a cliff hanger! Thanks for sharing, Linda
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Larrypic11
As you know, Barbara, I stop by from time to time to take a look at your ongoing story. I have not followed every chapter along the way. The writing is crisp and clear. My only caution, and it may be out of place because I am not a steady reader, is that it seems the harassment Anna is receiving is continuing too long to maintain the reader's overall interest. Anna seems to be in exactly the same predicament she was chapters ago. I'm not so sure a reader can maintain the constant state of discomfort without feeling as trapped as Anna is. It could be I haven't read the lighter chapters that might be there. Believe me I am well aware what a serious problem and topic domestic violence is, so I'm not meaning to trivialize or diminish its importance. Just some food for thought. Be well. Larry
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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As you know, Barbara, I stop by from time to time to take a look at your ongoing story. I have not followed every chapter along the way. The writing is crisp and clear. My only caution, and it may be out of place because I am not a steady reader, is that it seems the harassment Anna is receiving is continuing too long to maintain the reader's overall interest. Anna seems to be in exactly the same predicament she was chapters ago. I'm not so sure a reader can maintain the constant state of discomfort without feeling as trapped as Anna is. It could be I haven't read the lighter chapters that might be there. Believe me I am well aware what a serious problem and topic domestic violence is, so I'm not meaning to trivialize or diminish its importance. Just some food for thought. Be well. Larry
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Unfortunately this is the reality of many of the situations abused women find themselves in. I am trying to make this as realistic as possible. And my reviewers who have lived through it say it is realistic. Thank you for your kind review.