Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "part one, Chapter 16"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Barbara
The action is coming from multiple directions and you kept it moving along nicely. I like Ann'a new attitude. She's becoming shrewd about her safety. Things are moving quickly now. I do wonder about the note & who wrote it. Is there cause for an OOPS here?
Bear
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Hey there Barbara
The action is coming from multiple directions and you kept it moving along nicely. I like Ann'a new attitude. She's becoming shrewd about her safety. Things are moving quickly now. I do wonder about the note & who wrote it. Is there cause for an OOPS here?
Bear
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another great chapter. This is a story I want to keep reading. I could feel the tension Anne's flat tire caused. Great job my friend.
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Another great chapter. This is a story I want to keep reading. I could feel the tension Anne's flat tire caused. Great job my friend.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Herb
Another well written chapter. The inner monologue in italics was done particularly well. Its easy to see why your high on the ranking. But I guess being at the top of page one every Sunday also helps, :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Another well written chapter. The inner monologue in italics was done particularly well. Its easy to see why your high on the ranking. But I guess being at the top of page one every Sunday also helps, :)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
A flat tire can be a night mare if there is not any help around. This is another nicely done chapter that I've enjoyed a lot.
WONDERFUL JOB Barbara!
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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A flat tire can be a night mare if there is not any help around. This is another nicely done chapter that I've enjoyed a lot.
WONDERFUL JOB Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Barbara, is of admire as you displays in its novel all multiple facet of abuse and harassment. Really I have followed with great interest, i love and teaches.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Barbara, is of admire as you displays in its novel all multiple facet of abuse and harassment. Really I have followed with great interest, i love and teaches.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from KinaSalad
Hi Barbara, I enjoyed reading this chapter, Anna going to a meeting and big surprise with a flat tyre, just happened or setup? Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Hi Barbara, I enjoyed reading this chapter, Anna going to a meeting and big surprise with a flat tyre, just happened or setup? Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Fluffyhead
Another great installment about a powerful subject with a great heroine that more people should read.Great details, writing flows.Happy writing
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Another great installment about a powerful subject with a great heroine that more people should read.Great details, writing flows.Happy writing
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Hareem.S
Another good chapter barbara. I like how the story is progressing and they are giving each other some time. Hope anna grows into a strong woman. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Another good chapter barbara. I like how the story is progressing and they are giving each other some time. Hope anna grows into a strong woman. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CJ Lloyd
A very passionate piece that actually makes me want to read more into the novel itself, I'm not really big on Romance but reading about those fighting through struggles and accomplishing things through hardships always make a good read in my eyes!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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A very passionate piece that actually makes me want to read more into the novel itself, I'm not really big on Romance but reading about those fighting through struggles and accomplishing things through hardships always make a good read in my eyes!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Penny 4 your thought
I have read several chapters and I find your style easy to read the conversations seem natural and draw the reader along . The chain wrapped flower is a fairly good representation of a battered woman. All in all a solid five.
Penny 4 your thought
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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I have read several chapters and I find your style easy to read the conversations seem natural and draw the reader along . The chain wrapped flower is a fairly good representation of a battered woman. All in all a solid five.
Penny 4 your thought
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.