Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "part three, chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from june bug
This was fantastic writing. It was consistent and dramatically constructed. You kept the reader interested and in suspense. I wanted to read on. I believe writing like this will bring awareness and help to break the chain of abuse so many victims must face everyday. Fantastic work! All the best to you.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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This was fantastic writing. It was consistent and dramatically constructed. You kept the reader interested and in suspense. I wanted to read on. I believe writing like this will bring awareness and help to break the chain of abuse so many victims must face everyday. Fantastic work! All the best to you.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome and you deserve it. Best regards.
Comment from rightforyou
Hello Barbara
I have missed reading this story and had to refresh my memories as to the events that when on in the last chapter that I had read...
I can see the drama is building and soon it will come to a head.
I see that Anna is still brave making a stand even though she has been told not to. Bobby, his mother and are scaring her to death...She needs to be strong and move forward ...Well Done...Ron
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Hello Barbara
I have missed reading this story and had to refresh my memories as to the events that when on in the last chapter that I had read...
I can see the drama is building and soon it will come to a head.
I see that Anna is still brave making a stand even though she has been told not to. Bobby, his mother and are scaring her to death...She needs to be strong and move forward ...Well Done...Ron
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from me_tudor
This is really a great story. The cell phone picture section is a little confusing. I wasn't sure if the picture was on Troy's phone or Everett's. I'm glad you are writing this so that abused women will be able to read it and see that even when things are tough, it does eventually get better.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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This is really a great story. The cell phone picture section is a little confusing. I wasn't sure if the picture was on Troy's phone or Everett's. I'm glad you are writing this so that abused women will be able to read it and see that even when things are tough, it does eventually get better.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TSPoet
Hi Barb
I'm not big on the critique of stories
What i liked was the switching back and forthof the actors talking with such fluent percision on your part
Based on what I read I was even startled a bit when 'Anna' made that announcment about staying.
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Any Way,
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Good Day
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Hi Barb
I'm not big on the critique of stories
What i liked was the switching back and forthof the actors talking with such fluent percision on your part
Based on what I read I was even startled a bit when 'Anna' made that announcment about staying.
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Any Way,
.
Good Day
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for droping by. I understand about reviewing, I struggle with poetry.
Comment from Connie P
It all does seem to be coming to a head. Those Bobby has harassing Anna are getting brave and probably have a plan to do something to either hurt her or terrify her. A very well written and exciting chapter.
Connie
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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It all does seem to be coming to a head. Those Bobby has harassing Anna are getting brave and probably have a plan to do something to either hurt her or terrify her. A very well written and exciting chapter.
Connie
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TammyGail
Wow....Barbara this was indeed another compelling chapter
It was deep and you pulled me in like always
Your closing was ever powerful
I can imagine she is tired of running
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Wow....Barbara this was indeed another compelling chapter
It was deep and you pulled me in like always
Your closing was ever powerful
I can imagine she is tired of running
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from misscookie
Here we go again. everytime she think she can relaxes up pops the devil.
Idon't blame her for stoprunning.
this is a good chapter.
you had me on the end of my chair again.
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Here we go again. everytime she think she can relaxes up pops the devil.
Idon't blame her for stoprunning.
this is a good chapter.
you had me on the end of my chair again.
this is a good write.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Every write that stands against abuse is a winner in my book. I can relate totally to this write. You have written a tense aura into your work. I felt chills and had memories flood back, which is the sign of good writing. I really liked this!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Every write that stands against abuse is a winner in my book. I can relate totally to this write. You have written a tense aura into your work. I felt chills and had memories flood back, which is the sign of good writing. I really liked this!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Allison78
I think this is another wonderful chapter. So compelling and moving. I love your descriptions and dialogue, great job on this!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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I think this is another wonderful chapter. So compelling and moving. I love your descriptions and dialogue, great job on this!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tammara
WOW...I Really enjoyed reading this chapter! There is so much intrigue going on in Anna's life and all she wants is to be left alone to live her life. Thank heavens she has Sam and the others looking out for her. I think she is brave to make a stand and stay at the office even though she has been warned not to. I understand her feelings in not wanting to run away. Bobby, his mother and friends are scaring her to death but at some point she must stand her ground. I have been away for a while because I was very sick. So I have a lot of catching up to do on the reviews. Your work is always a pleasure to read. Another great chapter! :)
Tammara
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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WOW...I Really enjoyed reading this chapter! There is so much intrigue going on in Anna's life and all she wants is to be left alone to live her life. Thank heavens she has Sam and the others looking out for her. I think she is brave to make a stand and stay at the office even though she has been warned not to. I understand her feelings in not wanting to run away. Bobby, his mother and friends are scaring her to death but at some point she must stand her ground. I have been away for a while because I was very sick. So I have a lot of catching up to do on the reviews. Your work is always a pleasure to read. Another great chapter! :)
Tammara
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Weloome back. I hope you are doing better. Thank you for your kind review.
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You are very welcome, and I am getting better now. :)
Tammara