Joy
Expelling pain31 total reviews
Comment from Sally Carter
Oh Susan, what a joyful way to say thank you to someone.
Your lines radiate delight and gratitude, and the recipient must be as grateful to you as you are to him/her.
A wonderful reminder of how little it can sometimes take to make someone else's day a special one.
Some wonderful metaphors in that opening para - almost like free verse.
Having read this, I feel happy for you. Thank you for sharing the happy dust.
Sally
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Oh Susan, what a joyful way to say thank you to someone.
Your lines radiate delight and gratitude, and the recipient must be as grateful to you as you are to him/her.
A wonderful reminder of how little it can sometimes take to make someone else's day a special one.
Some wonderful metaphors in that opening para - almost like free verse.
Having read this, I feel happy for you. Thank you for sharing the happy dust.
Sally
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi there! I'm sending heartfelt thank you's via pasting again! SO sorry. I have read these and sure appreciate them. Any suggestions I have written down and will try to take heed! Hugs to you, and happy writing too! :o) Luv
Comment from Gideon Roth
Hello Susan. This was a fun read that was well written and very encouraging. It was a great piece of writing that expressed the value of those who brighten our days with kindness and support. Very well done...Tim
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hello Susan. This was a fun read that was well written and very encouraging. It was a great piece of writing that expressed the value of those who brighten our days with kindness and support. Very well done...Tim
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi there! I'm sending heartfelt thank you's via pasting again! SO sorry. I have read these and sure appreciate them. Any suggestions I have written down and will try to take heed! Hugs to you, and happy writing too! :o) Luv
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
this is a lovely tribute to all
your friends onf Fan story....
your words speaking of joy
and happiness..... which your
friends also feel to know you
are feeling this way.
Margaret
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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this is a lovely tribute to all
your friends onf Fan story....
your words speaking of joy
and happiness..... which your
friends also feel to know you
are feeling this way.
Margaret
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi there! I'm sending heartfelt thank you's via pasting again! SO sorry. I have read these and sure appreciate them. Any suggestions I have written down and will try to take heed! Hugs to you, and happy writing too! :o) Luv Susan
Comment from mazi jee
A brief chunk of prose.
Full of joy and emotion.
Expressive.
Self explanatory.
Definite form with indefinite ideas.
Like dew drop.
Smells of real happiness.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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A brief chunk of prose.
Full of joy and emotion.
Expressive.
Self explanatory.
Definite form with indefinite ideas.
Like dew drop.
Smells of real happiness.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi there! I'm sending heartfelt thank you's via pasting again! SO sorry. I have read these and sure appreciate them. Any suggestions I have written down and will try to take heed! Hugs to you, and happy writing too! :o) Luv
Comment from Dutchie
This is such a wonderful write, Susan. Yes I now that feeling. I've three of such friends in my life an we cherish each other
for so many years. My kindred souls...always knowing what I need, always being there on the right time. Wonderful...
Fia
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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This is such a wonderful write, Susan. Yes I now that feeling. I've three of such friends in my life an we cherish each other
for so many years. My kindred souls...always knowing what I need, always being there on the right time. Wonderful...
Fia
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi Fia...Thank you so much. I have lost most of my friends to death and moving. Sad. I depend on FS too much. But you all are so nice. Hugs and a thousand thanks Fia...xoxo. Susan
Comment from misscookie
Wopw!
That ws a beautful letter of thankfullness to whom ever you met it to be fore.
It trulty touch me more than you know.It's something people should tell that special friend now that they are alive to hear it. for it to will lift them up to know how much you care for them also.
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Wopw!
That ws a beautful letter of thankfullness to whom ever you met it to be fore.
It trulty touch me more than you know.It's something people should tell that special friend now that they are alive to hear it. for it to will lift them up to know how much you care for them also.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
Comment from robina1978
I think I might have reviewed the person you are referring too. But can't remember who it was and did not realise it was for you either. Good short story.
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I think I might have reviewed the person you are referring too. But can't remember who it was and did not realise it was for you either. Good short story.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
Comment from Laurie Clayton
Hi Susan,
I think everyone should have at
least one friend who can break through
the darkest days, I'm so happy that you
have one.
This is a beautiful celebration
of such a wonderful friend.
Thank you for sharing this
with us all.
Laurie x
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Hi Susan,
I think everyone should have at
least one friend who can break through
the darkest days, I'm so happy that you
have one.
This is a beautiful celebration
of such a wonderful friend.
Thank you for sharing this
with us all.
Laurie x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Hi Susan,
This is beautiful.
Love the photo as well.
Nice title.
Your words convey so well how other people can touch us and help us along our path.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Love you,
Katie
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Hi Susan,
This is beautiful.
Love the photo as well.
Nice title.
Your words convey so well how other people can touch us and help us along our path.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Love you,
Katie
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
Comment from wordsfromsue
Now Susan, you know each of us is going to go feeling all warm and fuzzy, thinking you're talking about the one reading it. :-)
It's a lovely poem and expression of friendship. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Now Susan, you know each of us is going to go feeling all warm and fuzzy, thinking you're talking about the one reading it. :-)
It's a lovely poem and expression of friendship. :-)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi Sue! Well, I am in a way. You are all great. ALL of you. I have so enjoyed your notes, your kind thoughts. I hope we all keep the thought that we are real behind the computers. Thank you Sue. You are a part of my happiness. Susan