A Homerun
Short sports story17 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, debbie, you did an excellent job writing this story about the woman whose window paid tribute to ricky's one time homerun. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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this is very well written, debbie, you did an excellent job writing this story about the woman whose window paid tribute to ricky's one time homerun. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is a terrific story, Debbie! I love that Judy was not only not angry, but that she left the dent in the wall. Now THAT is a lady who has her priorities right!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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This is a terrific story, Debbie! I love that Judy was not only not angry, but that she left the dent in the wall. Now THAT is a lady who has her priorities right!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you so very much. My son played hockey and I have dents in the walls to prove it!!!~Debbie
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And I'll bet you treasure those dents and have no desire to patch them. :)
Comment from visionary1234
Sweet little story that brought a smile to my face, Debbie - and a different style for you, too, I see! Delightful re-counting (though as a poem it would be more difficult I think!) I like the leaving the impression on the wall - that was a delightful touch.
:) Sharyn
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Sweet little story that brought a smile to my face, Debbie - and a different style for you, too, I see! Delightful re-counting (though as a poem it would be more difficult I think!) I like the leaving the impression on the wall - that was a delightful touch.
:) Sharyn
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you so very much. My son played hockey and I have dents in the walls to prove it!!!~Debbie
Comment from megg_2020
It's good to see a story of a bench warmer finally getting to play That wasn't my case in those days. Once a bench warmer, always a bench warmer for me. This was a nice, touching short story. I'm looking forward to the poem that comes out of it. Happy Writing. Blessed Be.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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It's good to see a story of a bench warmer finally getting to play That wasn't my case in those days. Once a bench warmer, always a bench warmer for me. This was a nice, touching short story. I'm looking forward to the poem that comes out of it. Happy Writing. Blessed Be.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from Trybuck
The underdog finally gets to be the hero. I loved the story. I'm sure someone who knows could point out some things to help it flow a little better but I'll let the experts do the critiquing.
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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The underdog finally gets to be the hero. I loved the story. I'm sure someone who knows could point out some things to help it flow a little better but I'll let the experts do the critiquing.
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you again. Greatly appreciated~Debbie
Comment from Eric Corsten
Thanks for bringing back these memories for me what a great time. I'm glad Ricky could prove his home run ..great little read here
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thanks for bringing back these memories for me what a great time. I'm glad Ricky could prove his home run ..great little read here
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
Hehehe very good Deb and very unusual that he should hit the ball right though her window. So it did keep on going eh? I thought so/
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Hehehe very good Deb and very unusual that he should hit the ball right though her window. So it did keep on going eh? I thought so/
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Yep, he did!!! Thank you~Debbie