Tall Tales and Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Rainwashed Day"Personal growth stories for children
25 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
I liked it. It felt like a nice little song, with all the repetitions. It didn't say anything earth-shattering, but then, that's not the purpose of songs. I loved the presentation with your wacky yellow duck on the yellow background. A fun read. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I liked it. It felt like a nice little song, with all the repetitions. It didn't say anything earth-shattering, but then, that's not the purpose of songs. I loved the presentation with your wacky yellow duck on the yellow background. A fun read. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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What a nice review, I am really glad you liked my 'wacky' little song poem, Thanks for the wonderful rating. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Treischel
Yes! A very catchy verse that carries a peppy 5 syllable count and smooth abcb rhyme scheme. Upbeat and sunny. The weather seems to be just ducky. Had a smile!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Yes! A very catchy verse that carries a peppy 5 syllable count and smooth abcb rhyme scheme. Upbeat and sunny. The weather seems to be just ducky. Had a smile!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I am so glad you enjoyed 'Rainwashed Day'. Your comments are wonderful, Thanks, Carolyn
Comment from Indie Skreet
a very enjoyable sprinkling of words and sorry I have to rain on your parade and not award a six, but I am all out :), best wishes Indie
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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a very enjoyable sprinkling of words and sorry I have to rain on your parade and not award a six, but I am all out :), best wishes Indie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thanks, I will take the six from your heart to mine any day. I am so glad you liked 'Rainwashed Day'. Carolyn
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my pleasure :)
Comment from Galactia
That is such a cook little kid song, bright, vibrant both in visual and text. well done, such a pleasure to read. my kids tomorrow will enjoy this one.
Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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That is such a cook little kid song, bright, vibrant both in visual and text. well done, such a pleasure to read. my kids tomorrow will enjoy this one.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I am setting it to music as I now sing it all the time. :-) I am so glad you like it. Tell the 'kids' hello! Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Carolyn - This is a great little poem. I liked it a lot. I figured it could be sung. I always write first then find a picture to go with it. I doubt if I could do it the opposite way. Kat
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Carolyn - This is a great little poem. I liked it a lot. I figured it could be sung. I always write first then find a picture to go with it. I doubt if I could do it the opposite way. Kat
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I did that too, write it I mean. Then when I found the picture I added a little. So glad you enjoyed it. Carolyn
Comment from lorijean
The sight of ducks swimming and playing in the rain, such a nice picture and a sweet thought for the day, love ducks in a pond but not on the menu!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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The sight of ducks swimming and playing in the rain, such a nice picture and a sweet thought for the day, love ducks in a pond but not on the menu!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I'm with you, not my favorite food but certainly wonderful to watch. Thanks for the wonderful review. Carolyn
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend the children will love this it reads very well and could be indeed put to music and it is beautifully presented regards Jill
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Yes this is well written my friend the children will love this it reads very well and could be indeed put to music and it is beautifully presented regards Jill
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thanks Jill, your rating means so much to me. I am happy you liked it. Carolyn
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a delightful image choice and I love the happy bright colour. A fun, little poem to read. By the time I got to the last line, I had inkling that the rainwashed day might change to a brainwashed day, but it didn't. Was I disappointed? No, only surprised! LOL!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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This is a delightful image choice and I love the happy bright colour. A fun, little poem to read. By the time I got to the last line, I had inkling that the rainwashed day might change to a brainwashed day, but it didn't. Was I disappointed? No, only surprised! LOL!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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What a great review, thanks and have a 'brain, I mean rainwashed day'. :-) Carolyn
Comment from FlorenceAnn
I read that this was in the category of song lyrics...so, I just began singing the words. It works beautifully.
I can imagine sitting on the floor with a half circle of children in front of me, reading from this book and we're singing your song!!!
Delightful!!!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I read that this was in the category of song lyrics...so, I just began singing the words. It works beautifully.
I can imagine sitting on the floor with a half circle of children in front of me, reading from this book and we're singing your song!!!
Delightful!!!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thanks FlorenceAmm. I am setting it to music (maybe today) and will probably add it as a chapter to 'Tall tales and Short Stories', what do you think? So delighted you enjoyed it.
:-) Carolyn
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Carolyn,
I love the idea!! Do you have the other chapters on Fanstory? No worries, I will look at your profile and answer my question.
I look forward to reading more of your prose!!
Florence Ann
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A soft and silky but simple and symphonic stand of song refers to, the intro and mid and the end of the song has a symmetry and alliteration, it has an appeal and freshness, I liked the order of presentation. 5/084
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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A soft and silky but simple and symphonic stand of song refers to, the intro and mid and the end of the song has a symmetry and alliteration, it has an appeal and freshness, I liked the order of presentation. 5/084
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you for such a wonderful review. So happy you liked it. I appreciate you, Carolyn