Leslie Ann's Exploits
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Thomas's revenge"A spoiled young lady who learns the hard way
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Comment from Gungalo
Oh oh, Leslie Ann is toying with her. It' s a wonder that Thomas has not told Jonathon anything. Aren't men more likely to tell each other first?
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Oh oh, Leslie Ann is toying with her. It' s a wonder that Thomas has not told Jonathon anything. Aren't men more likely to tell each other first?
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Gungalo!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Now it is getting interesting! I am in Mary Ann's corner.
She probably has the ability to outsmart Leslie Ann.
Have pity on the poor guy in the middle of a cat fight. LOL Good Job. Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Now it is getting interesting! I am in Mary Ann's corner.
She probably has the ability to outsmart Leslie Ann.
Have pity on the poor guy in the middle of a cat fight. LOL Good Job. Nancy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Nancy!
Comment from steevie
It will be interesting to see how the story will develop now that Mary Ann is aware if Leslie Ann's wiles. The story is shaping up nicely and I'm sure its going to get quite explosive before calm.
I'm looking forward to more adventure of Mary Ann, Jonathan, Thomas and last but not least, Leslie Ann.
:o)
steve
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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It will be interesting to see how the story will develop now that Mary Ann is aware if Leslie Ann's wiles. The story is shaping up nicely and I'm sure its going to get quite explosive before calm.
I'm looking forward to more adventure of Mary Ann, Jonathan, Thomas and last but not least, Leslie Ann.
:o)
steve
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Steevie!!
:o)
you rock!
steve
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
So Thomas has spilled the beans and stirred up a hornets nest I think and it is all because Leslie likes things her way what she wants she gets not worrying about who she hurts in the process well done on this write my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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So Thomas has spilled the beans and stirred up a hornets nest I think and it is all because Leslie likes things her way what she wants she gets not worrying about who she hurts in the process well done on this write my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Jill!
Comment from dmt1967
This is another good chapter my friend I like it very much the story is coming along quite nicely I think very well written thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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This is another good chapter my friend I like it very much the story is coming along quite nicely I think very well written thank you for sharing
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, dmt1967!
Comment from chasennov
'Thomas's Revenge.' This is a fine social edu poem drawing lines in the sand between certain adversaries caught up in love triangles and other innocents. A great lesson of life. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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'Thomas's Revenge.' This is a fine social edu poem drawing lines in the sand between certain adversaries caught up in love triangles and other innocents. A great lesson of life. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, chasennov!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from alexisleech
I'm really enjoying his! The rhyming is spot on, and the character development you manage to achieve with every verse, really good. So Mary Ann has been here before? It sounds like Leslie Ann may have met her match!
Alexis x
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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I'm really enjoying his! The rhyming is spot on, and the character development you manage to achieve with every verse, really good. So Mary Ann has been here before? It sounds like Leslie Ann may have met her match!
Alexis x
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, alexis. I always look forward to reading your encouraging comments. I appreciate them and you!
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is another enjoyable chapter. I thought the revenge proper was contained here given its title. It only aroused my curiousity. Waiting for the next chapter. First line one the last but one stanza, i think that 'or' should be of. kudos
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This is another enjoyable chapter. I thought the revenge proper was contained here given its title. It only aroused my curiousity. Waiting for the next chapter. First line one the last but one stanza, i think that 'or' should be of. kudos
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Perp Iheborn!