Leslie Ann's Exploits
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh dear Leslie Ann is now in a mental ward being tormented by her thoughts I am not surprised that she is scared this is well written and reads well I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Oh dear Leslie Ann is now in a mental ward being tormented by her thoughts I am not surprised that she is scared this is well written and reads well I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Jill, for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh what tangled webs we weave when first we practice to deceive! One good quote or another maybe better is
When you Plan revenge dig two graves. Now who's the bad guy? Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Oh what tangled webs we weave when first we practice to deceive! One good quote or another maybe better is
When you Plan revenge dig two graves. Now who's the bad guy? Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it! I appreciate your encouraging support and your comments - they make me laugh! Dossie
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Dossie,
The poem is outstanding, and the story it tells is sobering. Leslie Ann was really smitten with Jonathan to allow herself to get into the condition she did. I enjoyed the read.
Here is a sentence you may wish to review:
"Later, the police escorted her [to] up to the mental ward,"
Curtis
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Dossie,
The poem is outstanding, and the story it tells is sobering. Leslie Ann was really smitten with Jonathan to allow herself to get into the condition she did. I enjoyed the read.
Here is a sentence you may wish to review:
"Later, the police escorted her [to] up to the mental ward,"
Curtis
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Curtis, for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it! I also appreciate your support and encouragement!
Comment from steevie
Holy crap!! That night in the cadaver room really messed up Leslie Ann, big time. So one has to wonder if Marry Ann is all that sweet a girl after all.
Your story is gripping, Dossie and the dips and turns it takes, make the reading very enjoyable.
Who knows, maybe Mary Ann will turn out to be ten times worse that Leslie Ann. LOL
Awesome write, my friend
steve
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Holy crap!! That night in the cadaver room really messed up Leslie Ann, big time. So one has to wonder if Marry Ann is all that sweet a girl after all.
Your story is gripping, Dossie and the dips and turns it takes, make the reading very enjoyable.
Who knows, maybe Mary Ann will turn out to be ten times worse that Leslie Ann. LOL
Awesome write, my friend
steve
hugs
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Steevie, I love reading your reviews! As for Mary Ann, she loves her man and is not about to let some air-head vixen take him away. She concocted a plan with Thomas to scare Leslie Ann by locking her in the gross anatomy lab for an hour or two, but their plan goes awry. I'm delighted it is keeping your attention.
Comment from Curly Girly
It reads like a nightmare, a horror story. Now she is at the mercy of Mary Ann. Surely the kind lady will not harm her? Well, we will just have to wait and see...
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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It reads like a nightmare, a horror story. Now she is at the mercy of Mary Ann. Surely the kind lady will not harm her? Well, we will just have to wait and see...
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Curly Girly, for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it! Thomas's and Mary Ann's plan went awry.
Comment from tc_rego
I have to admit this is the first chapter I have ever read in my life that didn't have any dialogue in it. However I felt draw to the character and everything that was going on around her. Well written.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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I have to admit this is the first chapter I have ever read in my life that didn't have any dialogue in it. However I felt draw to the character and everything that was going on around her. Well written.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thanks for reading, commenting and rating Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it! Your encouraging comments warmed my heart! Dossie
Comment from country ranch writer
The revenge plot backfires and this has come bout now we shall see how things come about will she snap out of it or be in there for quite awhile? What do you think?
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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The revenge plot backfires and this has come bout now we shall see how things come about will she snap out of it or be in there for quite awhile? What do you think?
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
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Thanks for continuing to following Leslie Ann's exploits, I appreciate it! Stay tune....
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WELCOME
Comment from chasennov
'Leslie Ann's Exploits. 'Leslie Ann Goes Mad.' Absolutely as good as the other chapters were, and I enjoyed reading this story just as much. Well done.
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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'Leslie Ann's Exploits. 'Leslie Ann Goes Mad.' Absolutely as good as the other chapters were, and I enjoyed reading this story just as much. Well done.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, chasennov. Your encouraging comments warm my heart.
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It was my pleasure.