Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

This is a very good message indeed. We all need to pay attention to its love it.
It would do well in a Zcarol.
Bless you. Danny Jock

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017

Thanks Danny Jock it is a carol but music won't work on FS anymore like it used to. Check in the Author notes for the link to the old Carols page in an old Web site I used to run for our church.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi Danny, I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Came To Die For Us was well written Richmond team as well as imagery red well flood well no grammar issue so to speak to check if an object of contents were excellent scripted measures aligned perfectly thanks for dissing happy holidays talk to Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017

Thanks Ricky as above check the old Web site carols page for the music links. Still working on the MP3 files.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi again, I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Beautiful and true words, I was not able to listen to the music it seems my tablet is not supportive of the link. I will listen from my pc when I have time. I dont think we bumped into each other before.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015

Hi again new Sis Windows Media player should do it for you. I know Mobiles (Cells) and tablets may have a problem especially if they are NOT PC. Can point you to the carols page on our Church Web site if interested further as I have the Carols there as well. Thanks again. I have been told this one is good at any time even apart from Christmas. God Bless.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi again, I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

This would be kind of cool to hear with music. Are you thinking about sending it in to a music place? Sorry, not sure what that kind of place is called. Great job friend and write on

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2014

Hi Friend there is music to it. What browser are you using? Other wise I can give you the link to our church site where I have a carols page which has the music track. I do plan on converting these Midi files to MP3 eventually as they would be better quality even though larger files. Here is the link if you look in IE Browser music should play ok either on here or the link this was the most recent of four of my Carols I wrote. Thanks for coming by. Hope you can listen to the other three carols. http://nepeanbaptistoz.witnesstoday.org/Carols-Songs.html

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015

Hi you mean a publisher. I may try and Self Publish. I intend to convert the music files to MP3 and burn a CD of the music to add to the printed book of Written music for folks who pIay an instrument. I am going to submit these to Cyberhymnal if you are aware of that Hymn Site. Here is a link to our Church Web site carols page I set up last year hopefully you can hear the music on this one.

http://nepeanbaptistoz.witnesstoday.org/Carols-Songs.html

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi again, I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

I like the message sent to the world...good news of Jesus. Great music Christmas greeting too. Congrats on the awards. I like the Jesus came to give you life. Be transformed by knowing the creator and be heaven bound. Hope that more will know Jesus too. Have a blessed New Year! flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2014

AMEN dear Bro or Sis in the Lord I am guessing! Loving all the new friends and as a bonus Bros and Sisters in Christ I am meeting on FS hope you will look at the other three Carols and SO GLAD you heard the music. A lot of folks are not picking that up. it mainly works well in IE Browser that I have only just come back to using myself after some trouble with it for a time. Lord Bless and happy New year. I am in Australia where are you? Hope to check your stuff as I have time. I do have an Autobiography on here as well look for "The Little Dog That Wouldn't let Go" ( I am the little dog by the way hehe)

reply by flylikeaneagle on 27-Dec-2014

Nice to meet you down under. Good message to the nations. I live in south Minnesota where we have two inches of fresh snow. People get up early to snow blow the snow away. I just enjoy God's beauty and walk my dogs. Check out Christmas Miracle about horses and a celebration. Have a Blessed New Year! flylikeaneagle - nancy

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi Nancy Sounds like you heard the music if not I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

The birth and cause of the Christ Child has been debated over centuries. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very intriguing read.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2014

Thanks mate for a lovely review. Hope you heard the music? Works better in IE Browser. Don't forget the other t here Carols I wrote ok this was the latest one in 2002. All the others were written in the mid Seventies.

reply by c_lucas on 27-Dec-2014

You're wecome, Geoff. Charlie

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi Bro Charlie I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Is this one of the carols you spoke of? I agree that Christmas has become too commercial , especially in America, the only place I can speak with knowledge. We're in a run-away capitalistic craze here and everything is treated like this. Even our churches are commercialized and out to make big buildings and big money. We have to each, individually, keep the babe and his humble birth at our center. I'm sure the music is beautiful but I couldn't get it to play on my laptop.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2014

Are you on Apple Mac or PC? I can give you a link to the carols page on our church site where the carols are if you like it might work on there for you. Thanks for the wonderful review I had thought you came through here a while ago please look at the others there is some reward on those still pretty sure.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi Sis, I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Geoff,

Beautiful message and testimony in this work, although, the music didn't work. Overall I really enjoyed the read, and lighthouse is cool.

*Happy New Year!!*

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2014

Thanks mate are you on PC or Mac/ Apple? I can give you a link to the church site where these are as well if you like. Thanks very much for coming by.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi Sis, With no help from Tom I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Sankey - A Faith poem for the contest in the form of a Christmas Carol. Written in free verse with occasional rhyming couplets. A nice read and though you say he came to die for us. I always believe he came to save us and was prepared to die in the attempt. We may not all be of strong faith but from what I have read on FS a great many writers are. A good read and I wish you luck in the contest. Season's Greeting, warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014

Hi Dorothy contest is long over, mate hehe! I appreciate you coming by again. Not sure if you saw this a long time ago? I put it up for the appropriate time of the year. Hope you heard the music and also my other Carolsd? If you had trouble with the music I can give you a link to a page on the church web site I run where the Carols are at this time of year. I am currently giving my IE Browser a bit of a go again and the music mostly works better for some reason on IE Browser. let me know anyway. Planning on converting all the music to MP34'[s soon for better quality even though bigger. Thanks again sorry for raving.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi again Dorothy,I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a fabulous piece of poetic art dear sanky! it follows your faith and abtly describes the ordeal jesus went through to save our souls from condemnation.
very well-penned my friend!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2014

Thanks Rebekka appreciate your wonderfully kind review. Contest long over sorry. This is one of four Christmas Carols I wrote. Actually this one was written in 2002 all the others in the book were written in the 70's.I think there is an explanation at the start of the reall Truly Christmas Carols book or if you want to know more here is a link to the church web site I run and this page goes up for christmas each year. It runs better for the music on Internet Explorer browser either in here or on the link coming up. Lord Bless and thanks. Hope you are having a great Christmas depending on where you are or Happy New year anyway.
http://nepeanbaptistoz.witnesstoday.org/Carols-Songs.html

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Hi Rebekka again,I corrected the MP3 files for the music throughout the book if you wanna listen if you missed them before. Click on the second Link in each chapter.