Summer's End and Promises, pt. 3
4 friends gather to reminisce about good times.15 total reviews
Comment from bhogg
I know nothing about scripts, but promise myself to try and write one! I struggle to balance dialog and narrative in my work, but I read a piece like yours and no kidding... I can see it! Well done, Bill
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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I know nothing about scripts, but promise myself to try and write one! I struggle to balance dialog and narrative in my work, but I read a piece like yours and no kidding... I can see it! Well done, Bill
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Your review made me blush. LOL. Thanks again. Gretchen
Comment from lindalcreel
So Alice has accepted the fact that she is dying and has already decided where she wants her ashes. At least she is keeping a level head. I love the way that each of them had a little pill box and keeping with their daily ritual took their medications with a glass of orange juice. This was well written and easy to follow. Great read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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So Alice has accepted the fact that she is dying and has already decided where she wants her ashes. At least she is keeping a level head. I love the way that each of them had a little pill box and keeping with their daily ritual took their medications with a glass of orange juice. This was well written and easy to follow. Great read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the great review and the astute reading. Gretchen
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So Welcome:)
Comment from NonnyeLL7
"To Be Continued" are the worst words ever! That was
mean.lol. :) I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks Nonnyell7
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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"To Be Continued" are the worst words ever! That was
mean.lol. :) I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks Nonnyell7
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you from the meanest writer ever! LOL. Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Titanx9
Despite some cankerous moments, the women do seem to like each a lot. It's too bad about Alice, but I suppose that's life. I hope they'll do something exciting before the weekend is over, so Alice will have some lasting memories. This continues to be an interesting read!
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Despite some cankerous moments, the women do seem to like each a lot. It's too bad about Alice, but I suppose that's life. I hope they'll do something exciting before the weekend is over, so Alice will have some lasting memories. This continues to be an interesting read!
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from RGstar
I was apprehensive reading this one, it almost felt as if the friends were about to take their lives together. I became a little sad, but glad at the end when I saw that there was more to come.
A nice little story's beginning. I hope it ends well when you write the next chapter.
They seem to be so nice.
I dare not think where this story is leading. I pray it is a happy one.
Beat wishes,
RGstar
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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I was apprehensive reading this one, it almost felt as if the friends were about to take their lives together. I became a little sad, but glad at the end when I saw that there was more to come.
A nice little story's beginning. I hope it ends well when you write the next chapter.
They seem to be so nice.
I dare not think where this story is leading. I pray it is a happy one.
Beat wishes,
RGstar
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the great review. Gretchen