Magic moments
111 words. Sixty fans16 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is a beauty my friend - I loved everything about it. Crafted with skill and creativity. An excellent submission for this contest. Good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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This is a beauty my friend - I loved everything about it. Crafted with skill and creativity. An excellent submission for this contest. Good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Maureen.
Comment from donkeyoatey
How could I NOT love this? it flows beautifully, paints amazing mind pictures that would make superb dreams for a young child..your creative talent is amazing, and I am honored you chose my picture! Donkeyoatey
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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How could I NOT love this? it flows beautifully, paints amazing mind pictures that would make superb dreams for a young child..your creative talent is amazing, and I am honored you chose my picture! Donkeyoatey
Comment Written 10-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I am so honored by your remarks. I have always felt that the art work and the verse combine to make the poem. Thank you.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
for a the brass band....I think there's an extra word you don't want??? This is an adorable poem and so sweet. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and we do too.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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for a the brass band....I think there's an extra word you don't want??? This is an adorable poem and so sweet. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and we do too.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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You are right. Thanks
Comment from boxergirl
You've created a beautiful rhyming children's poem. I can see it being read to small children while their eyes sparkle as they listen intently to every line.
My favorite line: the magic moment we did borrow
Can always be in your tomorrows
Nice job and good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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You've created a beautiful rhyming children's poem. I can see it being read to small children while their eyes sparkle as they listen intently to every line.
My favorite line: the magic moment we did borrow
Can always be in your tomorrows
Nice job and good luck!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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thanks for the kind review.
Comment from lindalcreel
This was too cute. I loved the picture of the little girl. She is looking up to Heaven. I wonder what she sees that has caught her attention. This was a beautiful little poem, full of love. I hope you have many tomorrows with that precious little girl. Thanks so much for sharing.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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This was too cute. I loved the picture of the little girl. She is looking up to Heaven. I wonder what she sees that has caught her attention. This was a beautiful little poem, full of love. I hope you have many tomorrows with that precious little girl. Thanks so much for sharing.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Spiritual Echo
This poem is absolutely beautiful, filled with gentle love and wonder.
I loved this from beginning to end and feel that you breathed in gentle soft love and refused to let anyone shatter the magic of childhood.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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This poem is absolutely beautiful, filled with gentle love and wonder.
I loved this from beginning to end and feel that you breathed in gentle soft love and refused to let anyone shatter the magic of childhood.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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Wow. Thanks for the bonus six. Changing it up.