Comment from steevie

Excellent

Cool poem. I could just see a girl and her dog laughing up a storm, having the best time ever, swinging on their swing on a sunny day with a gentle breeze blowing

steve

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013

I can see that too.......... with a giggle....Thanks steve...

reply by steevie on 22-Sep-2013

:o)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

This is really cute. It makes me want to go over the park and get on the swings. Mind you, knowing my luck, I'd be arrested for being a weirdo. :-)

Thanks for the smiles, and good luck, Ted

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013

Thanks Ted, I don't expect to win, but I just had to do it. Glad it brought a smile. Now giggle, just do it!

reply by Domino 2 on 21-Sep-2013

If you're not in it, you can't win it!

The last time I swung in the park was about 20 years ago (I was over 40), but I was with a lady-friend, so thought I'd look 'normal'. :-) x